The Immortal's Trail Through Ten Thousand Forms

Author! I'm just asking if you dare to update more chapters. I originally planned to give five stars. When will more chapters be added? When will the one star be added? Replenish stars! Come on! Finished watching it again! It seems that I have to seal this book and wait until it is updated to Chapter 1800 before reading it, otherwise it will not be satisfying and enjoyable!

Brothers, although Tang Sheng has been a bookworm for more than ten years, this is the first time he has written a book. Many aspects have not been taken into consideration. For example, the pace at the beginning was a bit too fast. For example, about Ji Qianqian and the Three Strategies of Tongshen, I originally wanted to tell you a few more chapters, but unfortunately people complained too much about Ji Qianqian's strength. The data dropped day by day. Many book friends shouted that it was unreasonable, and even maliciously gave one star to express their dissatisfaction. I originally thought that my psychology was strong enough, but now it seems that I am still far from it. What I fear most every day is clicking on the comment section... Therefore, I ask those book friends who don't like this book to condescend and stop clicking comments...

The rating is low, but the standard is always online

This book is generally a good book. The setting of the Dharma in the early stage feels a bit too unnatural. For example, the Dharma of the White Chan can ripen elixirs for hundreds of thousands of years. Personally, I feel that there can be a step-by-step process. And is it possible to have dual Dharmas? Unlocked one by one, there are two such powerful Dharma signs, and they can both be used. It feels a bit ridiculous. The early plot setting is a bit jerky, but I feel that the author is getting better and better as he writes. As for other book friends who think that the protagonist is a bit too holy, I don't think it hurts. Daya, originally everyone has different experiences and different personalities. Only good and evil can give each character a different personality. It is precisely because the protagonist has gone from being a refugee to becoming a fairy that it becomes more difficult to be a mortal. Because the protagonist has an innocent heart, he will become more determined. My own way, in the words of Mr. Jin Yong, is called "A great chivalrous person serves the country and the people." I suggest that all book friends can continue reading with a tolerant heart. I believe that with the author's preliminary preparation and accumulation of writing, his writing style will become better and better, and this book will become more and more brilliant! Come on fellow Taoist! ! !

Very good, much better than Douluo Dalu

This book is good, the plot is touching, and there are basically no redundant chapters, which is rare among online articles about cultivating immortals.

It's good in many aspects, except for the price. The overall logic is quite rigorous. Hope more

I have been reading this book for many days, and I feel inspired by it. First of all, the author Jun worked very hard and wrote very well. Although I am very satisfied with the work, there are a few thorny shortcomings that I really can't complain about. 1. The love written by the author is really difficult to describe in words, it is awkward and dry, Su Qing likes it without knowing it, Guo Fan has no active behavior, and the plot has almost no negotiation between the two. It's no exaggeration to say it's better than nothing. 2. Many book friends have said that the copy is bloated, and some monks forcefully describe the process, resulting in some battles not being very smooth. 3. The protagonist's wooden sign has almost no effect. In addition, I think this book surpasses many novels I have read in the past, with idioms, allusions, and many things that show that the author has put a lot of effort into it. There are also some designs of weapons and the design of the dream world, which are amazing and well written. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better as he writes more.

The protagonist values ​​​​love and righteousness. Although I think the partner appears too early, it does not hinder anything. The people in the sect also value love, and there are only one or two mice.

Quite pretty! I hope it will be read by more book friends who like novels about cultivating immortals.