Naruto: The Story of My Two Souls in One Body

It does not rely on the system, it is one body with two souls, and the subject matter is very novel. It also writes about the psychological changes of the protagonist from being a salty fish to risking his life for others. Unlike other articles, where he travels back to Obito and establishes a good relationship with other classmates, it is all purposeful. This book is written very naturally.

Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is indeed very consistent with the appearance of ordinary people when they travel through time. Unlike some protagonists who are decisive and decisive at the beginning, there is no adaptation process at all. I also hope that the author can continue to follow up.

It's really good to watch, and it's not the kind of mindless cool novel that I hate. The ideas are very clear, and the graphics also brought me in. The setting of two souls in one body also made me feel very novel, and I felt like I was on fire.

It's very good. Although the author is a novice, compared with other types of novels, it is far better than the current Naruto fan fiction. Except for a small flaw at the beginning, it clearly expresses the process of a person's transformation. The part about Kakashi's father, although the character is broken, is the result we want most. The author's writing is also constantly becoming more and more proficient. It can be said that this novel written by a "newbie" is very exciting. I even doubt that it was written by a newbie? However, I found in the comment area that many people's viewing points are not in the same channel. Some people said that Brother Tuzi did not want to see Lin and the protagonist together, but I want to ask, when a person who has died can see that his beloved girl is still supporting him, shouldn't he feel comforted by this, or even I felt unworthy for that girl, and later I said with words, "I used my chakra to blow him up." (I won't tell you about the plot later) Do you want me to think that this is a wolf-like beast with a heart of a beast, repaying kindness with revenge? Although it is said to be a coincidence, is it not exactly this coincidence that gave Obito this opportunity? Obito regards the protagonist as his continuation, and Obito wants to change this sad ending. This is what I saw in the author's writing. I would like to give the author a suggestion here. If you want to see a person's transformation most intuitively, it is actually very simple. "Appropriate" description with scenes is a good choice. After all, I have some experience in this area. Above, 5 stars. (´∇ﾉ｀*)ノ

It looks good. This is the true reaction of time traveling to Naruto. The protagonist will be a little timid, but the protagonist has also completed the transformation again and again under the author's pen.

This book is still very good. In my opinion, I personally feel that the author can make him grow up a little faster.

It's very, very good. So far, there seems to be no problem with the pacing and the plot is not brainless. It can be said to be one of the best Naruto fandoms. At least for now, it seems that expressing the deepening theme is not embarrassing. The protagonist also doesn't have a gold ring. Such as the so-called system that appears out of thin air. At the same time, the protagonist's thoughts are also very realistic and relatively close to real society. The character descriptions are particularly detailed, and it can be said that there seems to be no character breakdown so far. (It's not like a certain AB's portrayal of female protagonists. It's a poor batch, and the character's behavior often makes people confused.) I hope there won't be a harem. (When you look at the characters in Naruto, do they seem to be able to be haremed?) Then don't be as good as Xiang, a certain AB who kills his relatives and friends at every turn. (So ​​far, the look and feel is very good. I hope the author's writing skills are stable enough and he can grasp the rhythm later. Although it is impossible that the combat system behind Payne will not collapse in the later stages of Naruto. In short, I hope the author's book will become popular, and I also hope that the author will continue to eat and write.

Author, come on, try to write more. You are one of the few Naruto books about Obito that I like to read.

The writing in the Naruto story is pretty good, and it fits the original setting quite well. In addition, the psychological growth of the protagonist group is also good. I hope the author can continue to work hard to complete Boruto and write it down. If you are worried that the chapter is getting too long and you can't control it, just put it away temporarily. If the author is not following the genre of pure and refreshing writing, then he should not lose quality in order to rush the manuscript. Finally, five stars are given and keep up the good work.

This book is not like other books. The protagonist is not afraid of anything from the beginning, not even killing people. I hope the author will write more.