The Villain in the Book: The Heroine I Write Is Absolutely Crushing It

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The book is good, and it's the first time I've seen female protagonists directly pursuing male protagonists. I hope the author continues to do well and writes even more exciting stories! Keep it up! Happy Year of the Tiger! May the tiger bring you great power and glory!

Well written, but the updates are too slow. (66666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666)

One day, God said to me, "Child, I can grant you one wish. What do you want?" I said, "Can you destroy the Earth?" God said, "Child, think about something else first!" I said, "How about making this author update faster?" God said, "Child, let's think about destroying the Earth instead!" Human nature is inherently good at birth; isn't the author even more of a villain?

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The premise is great, and the dual inner voices make it even more interesting and fun. It really fits the title; the female lead is incredibly cool. However, there's not much writing, a few errors, and it's a bit rough around the edges—all areas that need "optimization." It's much better than other books that need "revision," and it has a broader scope. I think this book has the potential to be a hit.

The poor policewoman changed her name twice, and there were even some spelling mistakes.

The concept is novel and the power-ups are reasonable, making it a fresh take on the current rebirth/reincarnation genre and truly exceptional. Of course, there are some minor flaws. I suggest changing the power levels to a lower-martial-power world; high-martial-power isn't suitable for urban fiction. The story is still in its early stages, so revisions are easy. Otherwise, you've already reached the Nascent Soul stage, wouldn't you be ascending to immortality later?

It's alright, but the story is rather bland and doesn't quite fit the typical villain-centric premise. If the author continues to write villain stories like this, they'll eventually run out of viewership. They could be a bit bolder, but not too explicit, or it might get taken down. However, it does have its own highlights. I hope the author sees this and can revise accordingly.

Author, please update more! I've read about 10 books where the villains just follow the plot for rewards and go home, and I'm tired of that kind of story. The beginning of the plot is so unpleasant that it affects my mood, and it only gets better later on. After reading so many of those, I get tired of them and eventually can't continue reading.