I Transmigrated into the School Heartthrob, Only to Get Dumped by the Campus Belle

Although there were some parts I didn't understand, that doesn't detract from the fact that this book is quite enjoyable. Kudos to the author, thank you.

I found the earlier parts quite confusing and even a bit padded, especially the part where Mu Qingfeng was singing, which could have been easily resolved with a few ellipses. However, I still think the author wrote well. Those who didn't understand the earlier parts can check out the descriptions of the male and female protagonists' inner thoughts.

The author shares the same values as me. One of the titles is about "licking boots" and "deep affection." In today's environment, too many people confuse the two without considering the essence. They see someone being overly concerned about another and call it "licking boots," only looking at the surface. How is "licking boots" defined? How is "deep affection" defined?

It's a great read. Others say they don't understand it, but I really don't see what they don't understand. The author's logic is clear and consistent from beginning to end, and it's unbelievable that some people still say they don't understand it. It's just that there are too few chapters. I hope the author can speed things up a bit more.

It was very well written. Both the male and female leads are highly intelligent. It's not a mindless wish-fulfillment novel. However, when I felt I had only read about a third of it, it ended abruptly. Where did the three plot threads go? First, why did the story about the female lead, Yu Xianyuan, stop after she left school?

Author, please reply. I really like your novel. The plot is good, and while there's some filler, it's not excessive. But... I have a... Never mind, I wanted to know where you live so I can send you some gifts. It's almost Chinese New Year, and what will I do without a knife... Or a gift? Right?

Well, the twist at the end really surprised me. This author has quite the imagination. I apologize for giving it one star because I didn't understand it at first, and I'll change it to five stars. If it gets worse later, I won't give it one star, but I'll still give it two or three. Whether you can keep my five stars depends on you.

It already has a structure similar to Japanese light novels, which is honestly quite enjoyable. The writing style, pacing, and skillful guidance in leading the reader to explore the characters' inner thoughts are all excellent. What surprised me most was the lack of excessive focus on the "loser's" regrets, desperate attempts to win back their ex, and repeated setbacks.

Thankfully, the author included a monologue, but the preceding plot was really difficult to understand. The author's writing style needs improvement. Although the overall quality is decent, aside from the breakup scene, everything until the monologue (and beyond that) is truly hard to comprehend. I don't know what else to say. Keep it up, keep working hard!

What I really don't understand is that dreams seem unnecessary. However, the inner monologues of the male and female leads are very well written ^O^/. I'm begging for updates, please hurry! The writing is excellent, full marks. I seriously suspect the author might have personally experienced these events, otherwise how could it be written so realistically? Also, is this really just pure urban fantasy? Nothing else?!