Genshin Impact: Teyvat Adventure

I hope the author will write more emotional scenes between the protagonist and Sora (if CP is the protagonist Sora). The author's writing is also great. I'm waiting for updates.

In fact, the writing style is not bad, but it is a pity that the protagonist is manipulated by Ningguang everywhere, all the vests are manipulated, and even his own letter has to be read by Ningguang before he can get the protagonist. It is a bit frustrating to read. I feel that the protagonist has been fooling around in the past 20 years, and has failed miserably, without any privacy.

If it's good, you can't write anything good. You have to write about a gay man. Could you please go to the female channel? I was stunned for a while. I have to say it's really wonderful. A convulsion of laughter.

Update quickly, strengthen some of the protagonists, at least have to be able to fight enemies back and forth, otherwise I'm afraid that the protagonist will be gone that day, and Paimon can appropriately reduce the number of appearances.

The plot and writing are pretty good, but still too little. If you want to slow down, let's slow down. I only saw the traveler after more than 100 photos. I don't want to see the plot, I want to see the protagonist and the traveler! Can the author write more and make the progress faster?

I really like this book. Not only is it original and I want to pay attention to it, but the author's style is also unique. Anyway, it suits my taste. After following the author, I found that the author is a bit miserable. He has fewer fans and likes than me, a person who doesn't write works. I feel numb. If anyone sees my comments, please pay more attention to this new author.

Come on, if it's a harem, remember to go to Ina Wife.

This book feels really good and I like it very much. Although some people say that the pace of the plot is a bit slow, I believe that as long as the author updates more and treats himself as a donkey of the production team, this problem will never exist [laughing][laughing][laughing]

To be honest, I originally thought this was just a popular book, but as I read on, I found that this book is actually very interesting, and it also improved my understanding of many details about Genshin Impact. I hope the author will not stop updating it.

Author, I advise you not to be ungrateful (✿ 一◡一)つ) ◜◡‾ )(hold high the all-empty flag)