Rising from the Common Pokemon

I am a new writer who has loved novels since I was a child. I hope my books can give everyone a little more fun when they are bored.

Don't pay too much attention to reconciliation, what you write is reality, not a game

It's so beautiful. When the teacher was teaching, he said to use an elf around level 10, but he ended up with a level 55 elf, which almost tied the protagonist's level 10 elf? I can only give it five stars, otherwise I would definitely give it 100 stars! I can't just disgust myself! Take a look at it more

I don't understand why Dianxi uses the light of destruction. Isn't this the exclusive skill of the Eternal Flower? Isn't this the same as other elves using Diancie's Diamond Storm?

The author thinks that Tadpole can be special. For example, it can have two personalities, the fast-swimming frog is aggressive, and the bullfrog is cheerful, and can be switched at will. (Also, please update the author soon!)

In fact, from the perspective of the work, I think this book is not worthy of five stars, but in my opinion, the 6.9 Rating is indeed not the true level of this book. Giving five stars is just to increase the rating a little bit. It can be seen that the author is still serious about writing this book, but there are still many shortcomings, such as too many battle plots, insufficient description of daily life and side plots, and the author is not stable enough when it comes to the protagonist's strength improvement. For example, I think it is more appropriate to have a level of around 35 when entering college, so that the heroine's strength in her junior year is more consistent with the setting of over 50 levels. The most important problem is that the time in college passed too quickly (it feels like the author wanted to finish it quickly). This stage should be the focus. The writing is too hasty, and the supporting roles are not vivid enough (especially the heroine, who has not been released for a long time). There are still some problems with the setting of the article. There are many questions, but I still hope the author can work hard and write a good book Forgot to mention, I think the real level of this book is about 8 points.

I don't know why, but it's a good thing

This book is quite good, but the only flaw is that there are too few people reading it. It's not interesting to read alone. I thought about recommending the book.

It's okay, but waterfall climbing was written as a special attack move by you.

I really like this kind of warm daily elf writing that accompanies each other to grow up. Although the author's writing is not satisfactory in some places due to the newbie, it is still very good in general. The author is also very open-minded. He will correct the basic problems mentioned in the comment area and listen to reasonable suggestions. Keep up the good work, author.