Genshin Impact: I Will Protect Ying on Her Path

Come on, author, I'm reading this because it's my first time writing a novel, and I'm here to give you some suggestions. The emotional descriptions and expressions of the characters in the novel need to be strengthened. Here is a suggestion for authors to read other people's novels to look for descriptions of characters' emotional descriptions, appearance descriptions, and action performances. I really can't think of anything else that needs to be strengthened. I'll think of it later and I'll add it.

Fill in one more word after "Goddess Pi Guan" and put it later, because the story line of the traveler hasn't started yet, so it would be too abrupt to put it in the front. (I hope the author can adopt the opinion)

Exploiting the mineral deposits of human intelligence is indispensable to be promoted by adversity. ——"The Count of Monte Cristo"

As the first person to post a book review, I give you five stars.

Writing a novel is really difficult. It took me a long time to write more than 3,000 words. 😭

Come on, great author

It's beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author, Aoli

It's well written, but a little lacking.

From a newbie's perspective, you did a good job.

The writing is wonderful, I hope you will continue to write.