I’m Just an Outer Sect Disciple

It is exciting, the main line of the novel is clear, and the storyline unfolds step by step. It is narrated in a eloquent way. It felt a bit dull at first, but as the content of the story unfolds, it gradually becomes more and more interesting. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes, and you are attracted unconsciously. The protagonist Xu Jing is peaceful on the surface, strong in heart, firm-willed, clear in goal, eager to learn and versatile, and endures humiliation and goes forward for the sake of the one she loves. She shows the responsibility and courage that a man should have, which should touch the heart of readers. The author portrays the modest, friendly, and enterprising qualities of the protagonist that are recognized and promoted by today's society. It can be seen that the author's intention is elegant and unconventional, and deserves praise. Okay, let's stop here and continue watching the drama!

Such a good book should be rated 9 or above

The plot is reasonable, smooth and compact, with no stallion male videos, no cheating, and no clichés. Low profile development. However, there are indeed many typos, which do not affect reading. Overall, this is a book about immortality that is fascinating even for female readers!

Very good, I like it. The plot transition was quite natural and successful. There is nothing harsh and uncomfortable. My level is limited and I can only comment like this. I hope it will not affect the author.

I haven't finished reading it yet. It's well written. Unlike many books on immortality, in order to make up the word count, there are too many descriptions of fighting scenes and no plot support.

This book has a clear context and a clear theme. The only drawback is that it is easily addictive [laughing]

I finally finished reading it, starting from when Xu Jing picked up the token and was bullied, and then became the peak of Fang Tianyu. Although there are some holes that have not been filled in, and sometimes the sentences are not fluent, but it suits my taste. Xu Jing is calm, not arrogant, not arrogant, has a dream of pursuing freedom, and is firm to her sect. Although it is because of the token, she still gives back to the sect after she has strong strength. Although there are intrigues and plots in the sect. Yudun, but it is precisely because of these that Xu Jing grew up, learned how to restrain and develop, and had a more distant vision. Xu Jing's pursuit is the pursuit of countless ordinary people, longing for freedom, and wanting to be at ease with the people they love. Strength is never an end, but a means. No matter at the national or personal level, I was deeply touched after reading this. Fellow Taoists, I will also break through the ninety-nine tribulations. The journey is high and the road is long. I hope all fellow Taoists will take care of themselves!

This book is very good and suitable for new readers. There are several sentences in the book that connect the previous paragraphs and the next paragraphs, which are awakening actions and enlightenment points. They are really awesome! ! ! Although there are many typos in the book, it does not prevent me from reading smoothly. I can only say that the author's writing quality is really good~

Xu Jing was just an outer disciple with no future at the beginning. After getting a magical outer disciple token, he started his legendary life. He made a fortune in a low-key manner and relied on the token to possess exercises, elixirs, and skills. There were countless strong men on the road to cultivating immortality. But in order to become stronger and to save his confidante, he kept moving forward, and finally found his own way, and achieved a strong and happy ending. There are many highlights in this story, which supported me to read the full text. Powerful tokens, clear goals for progress, constant opportunities and challenges, continuous gains in the path of cultivation, a pretty good story rhythm, innovative training settings, and mysterious characters running through the main line. What I don't like very much is that some of the protagonist's efforts are not rewarded, some of the people he associates with do not add to the story, the heroine has no brilliance, and some characters are annoying. Maybe I am too utilitarian. Some of the plots make me feel conflicted. The protagonist often has to walk at night in brocade clothes, and the token is both a golden finger and a shackle. Although I have finished reading, I feel that this story is a mixed bag of good and bad, and I can't describe it accurately. Maybe the same is true in the real world. The process will inevitably have twists and turns, and it would be nice to have a good ending.

A very wonderful book, unlike other books, it only knows about killing.