Shocking! My Beautiful Master Turns Out to Be a Reverse-Disciplining Disciple!

The vehicle is traveling at the speed of light, please pay attention to avoid it. This car... Bah this book, the speed... Bah the quality is very good, the author drives... Bah the update is very fast (❀｣╹□╹)｣*･

The writing is very good, but there is a problem. I have also read several female protagonists, and several of them have the same shortcomings. You must remember the female protagonist, you must have a sense of substitution, and the male and female characters must be well-balanced. For example, if two people look at each other, and the protagonist travels through time, he may not blush, but the woman cannot be too shy. In reality, if a man and a woman look at each other, will the man be shy? This is difficult to express, but it is also where the author is tested

In the later period, the author let himself go, and the whole journey was on the highway. The more I read, the more excited I became! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The whole book takes the relationship between the male protagonist Su Yu and the female protagonist Mu Wanqiu as the main line, focuses on daily life, and presents readers with a touching but gentle, complex but delicate, sweet but sad love story. Let's talk about the advantages first. In the early stage, the emotional description between the male and female protagonists was very profound, and the psychological activities were very detailed. The main line is obvious, all branch lines serve the main line, and the context of the writing is clear at a glance. The main characters are created very successfully. The idea of ​​women being superior to men is novel and eye-opening, and it was even more eye-opening for me personally. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The writing is hasty, lacks polish, names are thrown in randomly, plot jumps make people confused, and other problems accompanies the entire text. The background introduction is too thin, and it is unknown what happened between the Human Emperor, the Sword God and the Demon God. It is also unclear why the Demon God loves and hates the Human Emperor, and why the reincarnation of the Sword God is still invincible while the reincarnation of the Human Emperor has about zero combat power. Overall, this book is more like a romance novel than a fantasy novel about immortality. Although it has shortcomings, it does not outweigh its advantages. I personally think it is very exciting and can give it a score of 9.4.

After reading this book, I was really confused. I wanted to write something but I didn't know where to start. . . This book is really well written and the plot is very sweet. It is the sweetest book I have ever read, no exaggeration at all. The writing in Jiuxiao Continent is very good, everyone's image is more prominent and the portrayal is great. As for Europa, many book friends feel that the author is being pretentious, but I don't think it is necessary. After all, it is part of this book, and it is a very important plot. It is not inferior to Jiuxiao, so it is worth reading. The most unforgettable part is the ending. I didn't expect it. There was a knife at the end, and it was a giant knife. It really made me so uncomfortable. I read the last few pages word by word, even with comments, and I didn't dare to skip even one word. When I saw it at the end, I felt like my heart was hammered. The picture kept spinning in my mind. The more I wanted to forget it, the more I couldn't forget it. I cried as soon as I finished reading it. Damn, I cry every time I think about it. Of course, some book friends said that this is a perfect ending. After all, life is beautiful only if it has regrets. The last sound Su Yu heard was the music played to him by Mu Wanqiu, the last note. What he saw was the scene of his favorite wife playing the piano for him under the peach blossom tree. It's impossible to say he has no regrets, but it's enough for him. Generally speaking, although this book is not long, the plot is still good, but the ending is indeed difficult for many book lovers to accept, and they still hope that the author will make a big extra story. Stop talking, and his grandpa wants to cry... [Almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's pretty good, it's the type I like, but too many updates are not enough.

I have an idea. This ending is a bit O. Henry, from the sweet beginning to the grand finale, but suddenly a knife comes at the end of the play, which catches people off guard. It is promiscuous but not disturbing. It fits the label of a single female protagonist. It has a regretful beauty. It is a very good novel.

It looks good and fits my hobbies and interests. Big cheers for the author!

I hope it won't be unfinished, that it will be updated continuously, and that there will be no supervision. That's all I want (๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)

This book took off in the early and middle stages, but in the later period, the character fell a little (too much fun), (don't teach the author to do things, it will make it difficult for others to write). Fortunately, it was saved in the end. It was originally a good book, but because of some ljdz's author's mentality, Damn [angry]! I couldn't hold back the last few sentences at the end of this book, which was originally quite sweet. [Crying] [Crying] Knife me, right? [Cry] [cry]. Fortunately, the last few readers continued to write, otherwise I would have been depressed for several days (what about the sweet article you promised the author). I hope the author will write a small side story. At least, let this story end happily. Finally, I would like to say that the author can really write about the heroine [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart] Also hope that some readers will read the entire book before commenting? If not, it means this book is not to your liking. Then what nonsense are you commenting on [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]