Ultraman: A Starry Biography

It's well-written, much better than those invincible epics. The writing style just needs some practice; some parts of the plot are a bit stiff. But considering it's a novice writer, it's already quite good. Keep it up!

It's good. Seeing that company, I bet the protagonist will be captured and their energy used to create a mechanical version of Ultraman. After defeating a few monsters, people will think they don't need the protagonist anymore, and when they fight Gatanothor, the mechanical version is no match.

Not bad, just a little too little.

It looks good, but there aren't enough people. Keep it up!!!

It's great, and the characters are really good too.