What?! The Campus Beauty Is Missing, and the Maternity Center Is Calling Me In

Here, I give my most sincere ratings and suggestions. First of all, the love in the article that the author wants to express - whether it is the small love for his wife and children or the great love for the country and the nation, has reached the eyes of the readers through this article. But as an author, you not only need to think about these, but also make readers like and be more willing to read the story. In terms of writing ideas, I feel that the plot has gradually accelerated since the heroine was the daughter of the richest man. But I could have postponed it for a while and talked about ordinary dog ​​food and daily life, and I also want the author to talk about it this way. But it wasn't until my father-in-law came to visit me so soon that I knew the car wouldn't stop. This story is like a speeding train, getting faster and faster. As a result, the author can only tell the daily life of the protagonist after telling the big plot. This imbalance of big love and small love in the article may not seem like a big problem, but it is not. Whether it is the title of the book or the cute baby daddy system at the beginning, it is determined that the main plot of the book cannot be separated from the family happiness of the family, and it should even be written closely around this. And directly raising the protagonist to such a high position, there must be no turning back. This will also reduce the reading experience to a certain extent. After all, the feeling of a love story is missing. The above are just some comments for the author. I hope that the author's future books will achieve greater success. I also wish the author a successful career and good health.

This book is another new work by the author after his silence for more than half a year. After these six months of accumulation, Laomao's writing skills have also improved, and the plot is not sluggish. . . . In short, just be awesome and that's it. Congratulations to Laomao for creating new brilliance with his new book

I thought it was a mindless dog food article, but I didn't expect it to be a patriotic science and technology article. It must be praised, and the writing is not bad.

I have finished reading Chapter 107, so I can't help but comment first. I just started reading some last night. Reading this novel reminded me of "My Wife Was Kidnapped, My Black Technology Exposed", which is a bit like the story. The male and female protagonists are good-looking, and the male protagonist's wife has a strong background. After the male protagonist has a system, he starts to counterattack. I have already finished reading that one. Fortunately, I found this novel and read it again, hehehehe. I have a premonition that it will go to the stars and so on.

Not bad. The writing is very good and the rhythm is tight. At least it allows me to catch up on updates. I hope the author has unlimited brains and full of inspiration, but it shouldn't be too short...😂

The time travel system is close to you, Gotham, scientific research field, medical treatment, and warriors basically have everything you need. You can take the expressway from time to time without getting stuck.

The content is novel, and the story of the novel comes one after another, making people want to read it, and it also closely follows reality. The only flaw is that the plot goes too fast (but it is not good if it is too slow, it will make people think it is in the water), but this does not affect it. Also, none of the people in the production team are that lazy. They don't ask for much in a day, just 10 updates is enough.

It's super exciting, I hope it won't end in the future, it's a single female lead story

The content is really good. I finished reading it in March this year. I read two chapters last year before it was finished. I didn't think it was good. Then I suddenly wanted to read some scientific articles, so I remembered this. The more I read, the better it gets. I highly recommend it.

Although 4 in 1. What can I say about the cute baby plot, it is also perfectly distributed and not confusing, but the details still need to be strengthened. In particular, the author has a systematic function in the plot process. Although it is complicated, it is not chaotic and makes it seem more organized and step-by-step. Although I don't want to say more, I think I can almost end it here. Because how to say, even if you enter that door, there are many plots behind it. Many of them are not particularly easy to write about, at least in my personal opinion. So I think leaving it in suspense like this is actually perfect. Of course, it is ultimately up to the author to make his own arrangements. Support you, come on.