A Mayfly in the Immortal Sea

This book is the best one I have read among the Mortal Style novels in Tomato. This novel does not have the so-called "golden fingers" in other Mortal Style novels (the golden fingers here refer to treasures that can catalyze the growth of plants and can open up small caves). The writing is very realistic. It is not like other Mortal Style novels that are all written in a cool way and insist on being called Mortal Style. At present, my suggestion to the author: I think the author can write more realistically and let the protagonist develop his own small group (small group does not refer to power) and have one or two close friends, so that he can show the characteristics of "mortal".

This book meets all my requirements for Xianxia. It does not add opportunities to the protagonist without thinking like other Xianxia novels. The writing is concise and adds many settings in the big world that other novels do not have. Come on, the author. I would like to remind you not to affect the quality because of the update speed.

Great! The storyline and writing are both great! It's just... The author has announced that there will be a heroine... I like the main character to focus on his career and be beautiful alone, so I had no choice but to withdraw... I know it's unrealistic for Xiu Xian to have no emotional scenes at all, but... Maybe I'm weird~ It's a pity that I finally found a very good article on cultivating immortals. Great support for the author~

This is my favorite novel about cultivating immortals that I have ever read. It is simply a real mortal flow. The protagonist does not have any plug-ins to improve his strength. He relies on himself to improve his strength. I think it is a big opportunity for the protagonist to get a little chance. The writing is indeed very good. As for the reason why I gave four stars, it is because the author is too slow [eating melon] The novel is really well written, it is a real mortal flow, although there are many flaws. For example, when I joined the sect in the early stage, I felt very boring and was almost persuaded to quit. After leaving the sect, it started to get better. After leaving the sect, I really felt the charm of this novel. That is, the casual cultivator is different from other novels. The protagonist of this novel does not have any destiny that defies the heaven. There is no magic weapon that defies the heaven like other novels? For example, regarding the bottle in the palm, the author has never failed to write about combat power, which I think is a very good thing. By the way, let me tell you again, don't care about the price of this novel, because this was the first one to write it down [face covering]

This book is very different from the traditional setting of cultivating immortals. The author still has his own ideas. The structure and plot are very good. Please update more.

It's very beautiful and quite exciting! The best mortal stream after Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, the logic is normal and not awkward, and there are no cheats.

I think it is a good one among the mortal novels. The plot has no routine, the talent is neither good nor bad, the plot has ups and downs, and after reading dozens of chapters, I don't feel boring at all. I hope the author can work hard.

It's very beautiful and very real. Every bit of the male protagonist's experience is very hard, which makes people sad to watch. In short, I hope that the male and female protagonists will be together in the end and live happily😄. Forget it, I don't know if it's a single heroine or dual heroines, and there's a warm girl, so I don't want to watch it either.

Excellent novel. It can be said that the arrangements at each checkpoint are very thoughtful. Reasonable and logical. The characters are well drawn. Don't compare it with other worldviews of cultivating immortals. This is different. There is no coexistence between good and evil. Although intrigues are inevitable among the same sects, the right path still has the bottom line and persistence as the right path. This is fine and reasonable. It's rare to see someone with a heart. Although most of the articles on immortality focus on the world of immortality, eating people without spitting out their bones, they are a bit exaggerated. If a sect doesn't even care about the life and death of its disciples, how can it expect its disciples to be of the same mind as the sect? What about inheritance? Such a sect does not have the centripetal force of the sect, it is just a class.

The writing is very good, there are no exaggerated adventures, the language is simple and close to reality, and the plot develops step by step. It is a rare good article on Tomato