Another World: Awakened with a Top-Tier Talent from the Start

So far, the writing is generally good. After seeing what the author said is the first time to write, my personal feeling is still good. Although the plot is not full of ups and downs, it is also well-founded. The villain is also cautious, and to be more realistic, the male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist, and the female protagonist protects her husband like crazy, but it's a bit too sweet. Summarized a few points. The first point: The plot is currently developing slowly, after all, it is only in the early stages. The fighting aspect is relatively intuitive and not sloppy. The writing is not particularly numerical, and it is not a one-panel chapter. There is a small hole in it, which is why my lightning power was exposed. There will definitely be an answer later. Second point: Only a few characters have been expressed, and the writing is basically close to the facts. It would be better if some passers-by could be added, or as a partner team once or twice, instead of just being a five-person team, or a two-person team would make the senses better. The protagonist's parents are still two good people, but they are by no means ordinary! The starting point is that the protagonist's mother looks very young and good-looking, and the heroine's mother is the same, but the heroine's father is the richest man, so the male protagonist is still a mystery, and the Chinese God of War has not introduced it in detail. From this starting point, it can be seen that the hero's father not only opened a company, but the probability of becoming the God of War is 60%. Forty percent are foreign civilizations (for a better world view). If the male and female protagonists break up (meaning that the female protagonist knows that she is low-dimensional and does not want to restrict the male protagonist because of herself, and then the protagonist grows up because of this inner demon, and then learns...), Then the connection with the outside world can be seamless without being so awkward. The protagonist's good roommate is also a relatively cute child. The number of pictures is too few to express. We can learn from Swallow's overall view and world view. Science fiction still needs to have a worldview. The third point is that the characterization of the protagonist still hasn't grown up so far. After all, he is still young. I haven't experienced the storm yet, but the part where I almost died trying to save the heroine was quite embarrassing. This is a "young" author after all. The heroine's character portrayal is "younger" than the male protagonist. You can also learn from the three years and six months of Devouring. (Sci-fi study of Devouring, Taxing is also good) (Character appearance, clothing, and atmosphere can be borrowed from Jianlai and Xuezhong). This is not plagiarism. You are borrowing rhetorical techniques and scene descriptions. You can only rely on yourself to determine the direction of the plot. This cannot be learned from. (Why learn from others? Because what others write is good. Taking the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought and taking advantage of their shortcomings is not called plagiarism, it is called learning.) (Don't give me a pen to write such trolling words. Since I can publish these methods, I can also do it. But I don't have the intention to write. After all, I am very tired from going to work every day.) I originally wanted to give it four stars, but thinking about it being the author's first time writing, it was really good to write it like this. Five stars. No matter how many comments I make, I will always write down the reasons, and I won't be bragging without thinking.

The book is very good. This is the only cool novel I have read so far that has a heroine and does not collapse. It is not a harem, but it is better than a harem. Especially since this is the author's first time writing, the results are very good.

So far, this article is quite satisfactory and has no poisonous points. However, the author said that it was his first time writing and it gave me a good impression. Come on!

It's pretty good. The male protagonist is dark and warm, and the female protagonist is sweet, clingy, and protective of her husband. I love it. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch (chopper warning)

Ok, very good, come on, work hard, author, come on, I am optimistic about you, pay attention to your health, I wish the author all the best, good health, good luck every year, stay safe, come on, work hard

Ask the author if he just wrote this book? Because I read it all has 120,000 words. This number of words is only updated in other books for about a month.

The author, to be honest, I rarely find someone who is both a loli and a yandere. I hope the author will work hard and update it until the end. It will not be unfinished.

The score I read in the morning was 8.8 And by noon it was 9.1. Come on, author.

The works written by the author are really good, containing both reality and room for fictional imagination. There is a lot more fun and determination in the ethereal world. The theme and the setting of the general environment are what I like. Come on＾0＾~, I hope the update will be faster. Two chapters a day is too little. The author's imagination is OK. Come on baby, I need you.

The dog-food part is okay, but there are too many plots between the male and female protagonists. Here is a plot/dog head of Xu Man and Ye Tian.