The Divine Magician

In fact, I think it is a very good magic live broadcast novel. I like reading this kind of novel very much. I have basically read all the books on Tomato. So let me tell you how I feel. First of all, the magic described by the author is very nice, it doesn't feel stiff, it looks smooth overall, and the description is also very delicate. But when that supernatural event occurred, I was a little confused. Although the description was very good, didn't you think it was very abrupt? I feel like I have gone off topic all of a sudden. The adjustment is not about adding supernatural elements! 😂 There is also the issue of female characters. It seems to be generally normal at the moment, but do you feel that the girl in the special bureau has a tendency to develop into a heroine? Come on, it's difficult to write heroines in Magic Live novels. Most of them are like Wuyu =_=. I also feel that the girl is not suitable! Just a suggestion of course. The author has written quite well so far. I just hope that he can grasp the theme and rhythm and add more variety shows or competitions, etc. Instead of adding supernatural phenomena! Also, I hope that the female characters must have a sense of proportion and not be used to enrich the plot. The above are just personal suggestions, please refer to them for your reference. Come on＾0＾~😂😂😂

Personally, I feel that this book is good. The expressions, shocks, and highlights of magic, systems, fans, audiences, etc. Are all expressed well. It just adds a little more supernatural events. If it fails slightly, it would be much more perfect if the supernatural is changed to a criminal (in the magic: drawing a fish on paper, moving from the stage to the audience, and separating people in boxes, these magics were all done in the 1980s to 1990s)

This book is good, I hope I won't be jailed To be honest, when I saw Chapter 15, I really didn't want to read it.

It's very nice, but I want to say something. Strictly speaking, it's a mental system when it comes to controlling objects with your mind. Telekinesis doesn't match the space system.

The writing is very good, very unique, I like it very much. But can you add a female protagonist, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch, thank you!

Very nice! Very well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's pretty good, it's interesting to watch.

It started well. The plot, scenes, and character descriptions are all good. I'll give it five stars first, but then I'll leave a comment before I've read it. This is very bad. I hope Tomato can improve it. If it doesn't, I won't comment again in the future.

Chapter 15, I don't know what the plot will be later, but anyway, there is an administration with similar superpowers.

Nice! Come on! I think the magic in the early part of this book is relatively bland and pretty good, but as the plot changes, the magic in the book becomes more and more exciting, cooler, more awesome, and more beautiful. The author greatly requests updates! I am a professional viewer and don't like to dictate the content or planning of large works. I look forward to every piece of content that I don't know, just like I look forward to what to eat for every meal. I like surprises! I don't want what I think the content of the book should be, I want the author to think that the content of the book should be like this. If I am to criticize the content of the book, then I can just write a book myself. Why should I read books written by others? I support you greatly! Come on!