With an Emperor's Pocket Dimension, I Transmigrated to the 1970S and Became a Rich Woman

This is what it feels like to read your book. "Hello!" "Okay!" "Have you eaten?" "Eat it!" "What did you eat?" "Slap the cucumber!" "Are you full?" "I'm full..." "Then what's for dinner?" "Slap the cucumber!" "Oh" "Oh"

Thinking of this, Bai Chunwei frowned slightly and sighed. Seeing Bai Chunwei's sad expression, Su Ziyu patted him on the shoulder comfortingly. "Bai Chunwei, don't think so much. In fact, you and I are both destined to be reincarnated in nine lives. Our mission in this space sector has been completed long ago. Next, your mission is to save the alien planet. In fact, your mission is also my future mission. " After Su Ziyu finished speaking, she looked at her man firmly and seriously. Bai Chunwei was a little confused and muttered to himself: "My mission? Nine reincarnations??" "Yeah, well, your mission, and my mission." Su Ziyu grabbed Bai Chunwei's hands very hard. She smiled brightly and nodded vigorously. Seeing Su Ziyu's smile, it was so bright and moving. Bai Chunwei's heart suddenly became relaxed and happy. The two people looked at each other. A gurgling warmth flowed slowly in the hearts of the two people. The sharp mountain wind blew by, and Su Ziyu tightened her sleeves. "It's really cold, let's go back." Su Ziyu said softly and sniffed her nose. "Yeah, okay, my dear wife." Bai Chunwei replied with a playful smile. The two held hands and walked slowly down the mountain. In the distant village, smoke from the rooftops was rising. All of this is so picturesque. At midnight, there was another thunder. Su Ziyu and Bai Chunwei held hands and jumped into the air. The two of them stepped on a big cloud and flew into the sky. From then on, this mortal world had nothing to do with the two of them.

The overall content of the story is there. If you don't pay too much attention to the narration and writing style, the story is okay. It is normal for rural parents to have a short life. There is a little more God's perspective, so I won't go into details, and there are also more inner descriptions. In fact, you can hear that the expressions can be reflected in the same manner as the movements. More important and lively scenes can also be reflected through dialogue and key characters. For example, when the heroine's store opens, who helps and supports it, how the heroine entertains, and how she takes care of the scene during the opening can all be described through dialogue and actions. There is a lot of description, and if the important plot is passed over briefly, it will give the reader a feeling that the plot is not important. Another heroine is a little different when she was a child than when she grew up. When she grows up, she is more inclined to the modern life thought of this body. When she was a child, she spoke and acted more with the attitude of the soul body. Some simple sentences can be repeated, and the adjectives can be simpler. Some idioms are not used very appropriately and can be spoken in colloquial terms without idioms. At the beginning, I focused more on the heroine's ideas. Later, after describing the process, I felt more like pushing the heroine through the plot. In fact, I could write a few big scenes, and the big things would feel better. The plot will also move forward and will not be described all the time. Dialogue, expressions, action scenes, three back-and-forth dialogues in one big scene plus scene description and character description, it will be almost 1,000 words. Later, you can describe the development of the scene, or the foreshadowing in the early stage and the subsequent conflict. You can also write more scenes with more people. 2000-3000 Words will be no problem. In this way, the overall story will be more full and attractive. The use of the heroine's golden finger is not particularly useful. Generally, the golden finger will be more reliable when the heroine is in desperate need of help or can promote the heroine's growth and advance the overall progress of the story. If you think about it, you can actually write it without cheating. Just relying on time travel and rebirth, having a different personality and knowing the previous life of the original owner will open a bug. Since there is a gold finger, at that time, more people could write about the feeling of contributing to the country and also mention the use of gold fingers.

So good looking! I really like watching it ￣ ￣)σThe author is so cheers＾0＾~

It couldn't be that the heroine of the 21st century dreamed about her past and previous lives. At the beginning, it just said that the heroine in the 21st century had a dream, and then dreamed about how she defeated demons and monsters when she was the empress. Then she couldn't hold on anymore, and then a wisp of soul broke out of the void and went to the 1970s, saying that she had snatched the baby girl's body. This should not be snatching the body, so the little one should be a new baby. So did the heroine from the 21st century wear it? I can't even write it clearly. You can at least write that the memory of the heroine's previous life and this life are integrated before wearing it. Otherwise, it feels like watching someone's dream. It's not like traveling through time.

Is this time traveling to a fantasy world?

This book is finished, you can read it. This book has been completed, dear friends, you can come and read it.

The male and female protagonist's three children were not well educated. Didn't one of them kill someone? Why did all three children die young? Looking at it from the Empress's dimension, it doesn't have much effect.

Very pretty! The writing skills are strong and the characters are created very well!

The plot is good and the writing is even better. I hope there will be more plots.