Three Babies at Once: The Super Tycoon Dad

What did I write? This is, I wrote an article in a mess. The more I read, the more confused I am. You don't know what to say. Just copy and paste. Other people's copy and pasting is much better than yours. Your copy and paste is infinite. What are you writing? This is what you want to write. You just don't have a preface and a follow-up. If you can't write, don't show it to others.

The author, don't you take a look at how many people are criticizing you? Are you here to practice hand speed? Just write and don't look at what you've written? You want to make some money by writing online articles, but your strength doesn't allow it.

Shouldn't the story about the nanny be a little sweeter? You look like the one in the Godly novel about giving a system and then a lot of pretense and slaps in the face, and there are just a few more children... I can almost guess the other plots without reading the front and back...

What the hell is this written? The preface doesn't match the postscript. It's a mess. What the hell? Bad review.

I was confused. I looked at dozens of pictures, and the more I looked at them, the more confused I became. Where is the male protagonist's brain? Call someone by their full name right from the start? Is he polite? Could you please learn from other works?

I can't understand one word. Two words are too messy. Four words are a mess. Poor junk book

It's not bad. Why does it look like the male protagonist is a noob? And the shares of the famous creative company are so messed up. At first, he said he got 70% of the shares, but they were transferred to the female protagonist, and then he got the shares of the company later. How did he become the largest shareholder? And what the heck is the heroine? Why is she still in middle management? There is also the card that the hero gave her when we first met. She has no money. She has no money to pay the rent. The nanny has no money to give. The hero's card is useless. Is there no money for company shares? Oh my god, what the hell is this?

The fighter jets in the garbage are messy and disorganized. If you want to see them, be prepared in advance.

There is no logic at all in this nonsense. At first, when the other party didn't know, the two of them sat together and knew that the other party gave them the shares without making a phone call or sending any information. Wait a minute, and then they obviously gave the bank card to the company shares and said that they didn't want to bear the living expenses for the children. "Tried the Poison Chapter 8" was poisonous.

This is no longer a bad writing style, it's simply a mess. The heroine opened her own company just as I said before, but then she became an ordinary office worker when she bought milk powder. In order to show off, the author really didn't care about anything!