Three Babies at Once: The Super Tycoon Dad

What the hell did I write? This is a jumbled mess, and the more I read it, the more confused I get. I don't even know how to describe it. If you're just copying and pasting, then other people's copy-pasting is much better than yours. Your copy-pasting is just endlessly ridiculous. What are you writing? It's not just writing whatever comes to mind, but it's also completely incoherent. If you can't write, then don't come out and mess with others.

Doesn't the author see how many people are criticizing you? Are you just practicing your typing speed here? You just keep writing without even looking at the rubbish you've written! You want to make money by writing web novels? Your skills aren't up to par.

Shouldn't stay-at-home dad stories be a bit sweeter? This one sounds like a typical rich kid novel where someone gets a system, then there's a bunch of showing off and getting slapped in the face, and then they have a few kids... I can pretty much guess the rest of the plot just by reading the beginning...

What kind of rubbish is this? It's incoherent, a complete mess, utter garbage. Thumbs down.

I'm completely baffled. I've looked at dozens of pages, and the more I look, the more confused I get. What's wrong with the male lead's brain? He addresses everyone by their full names right from the start? Is he even polite? Could you please take a look at some other works?

I can't understand it. One word is messy, two words are too messy, four words are a complete mess. Terrible, garbage book.

It's alright, but the male lead seems so incompetent. And the stock ownership plan at that renowned creative company is such a mess. He initially said he got 70% of the shares, which he then transferred to the female lead. Then later he got more shares in the company, so how did he become the largest shareholder? And what's with the female lead? She's trying to get into middle management!

The worst of the worst; it's a complete mess. Prepare in advance if you want to see it.

This is completely illogical and nonsensical. Initially, they sat together without the other person knowing, without phone calls or messages, and it was clear the other person had given them shares. Then, after giving them a bank card and company shares, they said they only gave them living expenses and didn't want to support the child. (Chapter 8 of "Trial Poisoning" has taken effect.)

This isn't just bad writing; it's downright a mess, completely nonsensical. One minute the female lead is saying she owns a company, and the next she's just an ordinary office worker buying baby formula. The author really doesn't care about anything in order to show off and slap faces!