The Beloved Little Girl: The Jin Family’s Lucky Charm Has a Pocket Dimension

To be precise, this book is my first novel. It was rejected twice before, but I couldn't let it go. It took a year to delete and delete it. A year later, it was successfully signed, and I can finally tell everyone the story in my heart. Some things in this book are real, and there are some people that I can never find again. The fiction, reality, and fiction can be regarded as another world I weaved!

Although it is a short article, it is well-written and interesting. The writing style is also good, not shallow but not clear. It is very emotional and humane, which makes people read it. The heroine is also good. She is innocent, passionate and humane. She takes good care of her grandfather and her elders and relatives. She is comfortable to watch. She has a very good group pet attribute. She is also cute. Her skills are also super exciting and enjoyable to watch. There are all kinds of excitement and fantasy in the daily life, and the writing is very good. However, the ending feels too sudden, and it feels like I haven't finished writing half of it~ I don't really want to see how the male protagonist and female protagonist will be. The romance is not interesting and too tacky. I just should continue to write the heroine's legendary and wonderful story. I feel that it is over before I get there~ I don't know if the author has no idea or is too busy to have time to write~ It's a bit regretful~

I still want to see it, but I haven't seen enough

I didn't know until I read the review that this was your first novel. I only saw this novel after reading other novels you wrote and clicking on your avatar to enter. I gave you four stars before. I gave you four stars. It's a pity that the male and female protagonists spend less time together❗️ After discovering it, I will immediately change it to five stars🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️ Delete the four-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟 and change it to five-star rating 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟praise❗️❗️❗️ I hope the author✍ can write better novels to share with our readers❗️❗️❗️

It's very interesting, but the ending is a bit too fast 🙂

The writing is relatively novel, but it is too short. I hope there are some clues!!!!

It's funny and interesting. I watched it all the way through.

Yes, the ending was a bit unexpected. I haven't seen enough yet. I really like Twinkle.

Jin Shining - Sense of Justice, Erha, Funny, Xiaoyi, has the ability to fearlessly come and go in the human world and the ghost world. Although I didn't see enough, this ending is really good!

It's great to watch, but it ends too quickly. I'm not satisfied with it.