An Evil God Doll from the Start: Do I Even Have a Choice?

The writing style in the beginning is a bit immature, but the concept is novel and the plot is interesting. It gradually gets better and I read the latest chapter in one go, which is very good.

I don't know what those people who give one star because of a minor flaw think about it. In my opinion, this book is the most perfect character creation I have ever seen. His characters even have different tone of voice for each person. This book is a little embarrassing, but it is not as serious as those one-star bad reviews say. I suggest those who have one star peace to put the character into the environment from a psychological point of view, think carefully, don't always regard yourself as a god, and can remain rational in various circumstances.

Note: personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! Personal thoughts! [Note] Comments with a bad tone will not be accepted here, but I will respect every polite netizen [blowing kiss] I think the character design of this book is okay. The more I read Leng Yuexi, the more I like it. The protagonist is also crazy and I love it. However, some of the author's descriptions and logic are a bit problematic, which makes it feel a bit strange to read. Of course, if you come to read Invincible instead of the plot and Invincible, you can read it. I only have a short time to read it. I just suggest that you read a little bit first to test the water before deciding whether to pursue it or not. The plot is actually quite cliche, that is, the protagonist is bullied in the early stage and rises in the later stage. Type, but a little different, a little fresh, because some people who bully the protagonist have been rectified at the beginning, and I haven't seen the subsequent plot, but just talking about the first part, the plot is old-fashioned and a little fresh, and then I think the part where I save the grandma can be slightly changed. It can be changed to say that although the grandma does not die in the end, Leng Yuexi's feelings in it should not be too strong, and it should be weakened a little to reflect the indifference caused by crazy comments. Personal suggestion, you can not adopt it. In terms of rating, because some parts are very inconsistent, I don't think it looks very comfortable. However, the invincible writing is genuine and the character portrayal is okay, so I gave it four stars. I would like to suggest that the author improves his logic. The author should remember that this is an invincible novel, not a Mary Sue novel. Don't pay too much attention to the appearance of the character. "Beautiful eyes" or "catkin" should not appear in tense or important situations. Just change them to neutral ones, such as "eyes" and "little hands". Because Leng Yuexi is not an orphan, catkin is not suitable. At least there will be calluses on the hands. Beautiful eyes are okay, but they appear in the wrong place. Finally, I would like to add that although this book is not to my liking, the author has a hard time coding. Please work hard. I'm leaving first [Sending my heart] This is the first time I have commented with so many words. I hope you can read it patiently. I really hope this book gets better because I like Leng Yuexi very much, so I listed my opinions and suggestions. I hope this book will get better and better [Blow kiss]

The beginning of this book is very..., Emmm, which makes people uncomfortable, but other than that, the content of this book is very attractive and fresh. My only expectation is that every chapter is like the author's great care.

My mother said that if you play with your mobile phone for 24 hours straight, you will die suddenly. I have been playing for 23 hours and 59 minutes. I am laughing so hard. I am totally confused.

It's pretty good, the plot is smooth and compact, cheers for the author💪 A good book requires a 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 five-star recommendation! Clockwork barrage suppresses shock Σ(っ °Д °;)っ Salute to the author (｀･ω･´)ゞ

I'm reading this book. I'm familiar with the slap-in-the-face plots, so overall it's not bad^ω^ and it's written about a group of children in the early stage (´-ω-`). Don't worry so much about it.

I thought it wasn't a harem story, but it turns out... Ugh Although the writing is good, it's not my type. Give me a five-star review, which is my final conclusion to this book.

I don't know why this book is not rated 9. It's so unscientific! I used to search for books with high ratings, but later I found that some of the highly rated books did not meet my personal preferences. It wasn't until I accidentally clicked on this book that I discovered that my little baby was here! ! ! Leng Yuexi is so awesome! So cool! Author, please update,

This book needs to be read patiently. The writing is relatively immature at the beginning, but it improves a lot as it goes on, getting better and better. I hope people who have only read a few chapters will stop talking nonsense. This book is really not bad.