Quick Transmigration: Those Years I Was Hounded by Yandere Male Leads

I'm a little afraid of being scolded when I say it. After all, I only watched one or two planes. I really like this subject matter, but when I saw the rest, I really couldn't stand it anymore. I don't know what the rest of the writing is like, but I still want to talk about the problems that arise. The first is that the emotional transition is a bit stiff. Take the leader of the Demon Cult for example. I really looked carefully, but I still don't know why I suddenly fell in love with Shou. There was no reason, and I didn't say what Shou had done. It seemed to be a whitewash in Gong's eyes, just the few righteous words Shou said. In fact, even the simplest thing about being fascinated by beauty was To get to know this person, I think we should describe it more when Gong inadvertently marvels at Shou's beauty. In short, I just feel that the emotional line between the two of them can be written more carefully and slowly, so that the transition between Gong and Shou can be more natural and delicate, and then The ending could be more specific, but it is very sloppy and fast. Apart from this, there is no big problem. The subject matter is well chosen. However, I think the author should be a novice when starting to write, so many people do not pay attention. Later, the writing will get better and better, starting from the next one or two planes. You can feel that the writing style is getting better. In fact, I also write novels myself, but not on the same platform. The above are my personal opinions. I hope you don't mind. After all, I have no malice, but I think the overall situation is very good, and I think the author is quite cute. Keep up the good work for the author of Four Hearts! ! ! ! ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

I really like this book, the more I read it, the more I am interested in it. That's it, the ending of the second world is confusing and unclear. I have seen all three worlds, and I didn't understand it until the third plane. I suggest the author explain this. Otherwise, some readers will just leave a negative review if they don't see it clearly, and the impact will not be good (just a suggestion). Also, the master is written in this aspect. Can you write a sweetheart? Please, if it doesn't work, forget it! I have no intention of interfering.

|｡･㉨･)っDemining♡♪ ✧*This book sometimes has plot directions that make people wonder what's going on. ✧*You don't have to watch the planes you don't like, it won't make you confused, so feel free to watch it ✧*The yandere male protagonist in this book will not be so yandere, he will have some possessiveness and will not be offensive, so you can eat it with confidence ✧*Some natural passages in this book require your reading ability ✧*The che su of this book will have one (hundred million) points of kua, and sometimes there will be a little benefit. If you don't know what * means, go to the comment area to find out. ✧*Writing is not easy for the author. If you don't like to read it, please click the button on the upper left and don't leave negative reviews. Thank you! It is recommended that you go to the comment area to clear mines when reading in the future. ❀ʕ๑•That's it ㉨ Goodbye•๑ʔ❀

Qiuqiu and Xiaoyan are so perfect for each other. Qiuqiu is pure and lustful, with a slightly confused personality that is also super cute. Xiaoyan is dedicated and affectionate. Although he is paranoid, his love is deep and super sweet. Watching them fall in love smoothly is so comfortable. This article is great.

Nice. Sorry, I'm at a loss for words. But, chase me! ! ! ! ! Sisters, charge forward.

The overall feeling is quite good. The two people have traveled through so many worlds. At first they thought it was their first encounter, but it turned out to be a reunion. They accidentally forgot the memories of being together with Xu. Xu only appeared in so many small worlds to remind A Ci. In the end, the memories were recovered. Two little idiots, they are together well. The writing is still good, and the overall feeling is good. You can rush if you like

I originally loved reading male and female comics, but when I saw Pure Love in Tomato, I clicked in with the mentality of giving it a try, but who the hell can tell me why it looks so good

This book is very good, highly recommended Each world is relatively short. If you like fast progress, you can check it out. But I still hope that you can write each world in more detail. Xue Wei wrote it in a longer way (●´ω｀●)ゞIt's not enough, please give me more (,,ω,,)

Immediate praise, I like it so much. If possible, can any book friends recommend me some male-to-male fast-traveling books about "Two Directions"?

This book is very good, I will give it five stars first. Every world is a little too fast, It's more to my liking. I don't really like watching it. Slowly Also, every male protagonist in the world falls in love with Gu for no reason. I was very confused. It was probably because it was too fast at the time. If it's too fast, you'll be confused; if it's too slow, you'll be impatient. So I think this book... Is more to my liking, So it's five stars❤️❤️❤️ ♡(*´∀｀*)(*´∀｀*)♡