Quick Travel: Kick Out Bai Yueguang and Counterattack to Become the Male Protagonist

It's super beautiful, has excessive sugar content, and is very sweet. The protagonist succeeds in every world [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

When I first read it, I was a little disappointed. The plot was mediocre and the writing was not good enough. Especially the words were missing, there were too few words, and sometimes sentences were missing. It was really confusing. But the more I read it, the more amazing I felt and the more awesome the author was. He was making rapid progress and the story was getting better and better. You can really see the author's progress in every chapter. I feel like the author was born to eat this kind of food. To be honest, I get emotional when reading novels, but I usually don't cry. But this novel made me shed tears from the beginning of the second world. It's really... So well written! ! ! I absolutely love this book and the author so much! ! ! Just a little bit haha, the author is begging, please be faster (.•́•̀.)! ! !

You are quite good-looking. Don't think that you are so good-looking, so elegant, so beautiful, with white teeth and red lips, and a frown on your face, like a water hibiscus. Such as a crown jade, a flowery face, charming face, bright eyes and white teeth, a thousand beauties, a charming person, a charming head, a moth-like eyebrow, a flower-like jade, eyes that cut through the water, a graceful and graceful figure, an immortal posture, a small family jasper, a beautiful appearance and a wise heart, a young peach and a plum, a graceful manner, and a hand as soft as jade, it is very remarkable.

Don't believe those people in the comment area, they are all talking nonsense. This novel is really sweet. The whole world is sweet, and there is no cruelty in any world. If you listen to me and love reading sweet pet novels, you must read it. If you don't read it, you will regret it. Especially the first and second worlds, they directly hit my sweet spot. There is no element of cruelty. The interaction between attack and reception is also very sweet. The author's skill in spreading sugar is also very good. I really envy their fairy love. [Sinister smile]

I think the plot is very good. I have read a lot of novels, most of which are just a formula and I feel it is easy to guess the plot, but this novel will give me some surprises. The author's writing style is very good and his views are also very correct. Even if Danmeiwen is taken off the shelves, I will always keep this book on my bookshelf. I hope the author can continue to update it and never give up on it. 😭

It's really super good-looking. Maybe I've read too many sadistic stories. In the first world, I didn't have any big mood swings. What really made me upset was "Whale Falls". When I saw "Brother, can you take me home?" Tears welled up in my eyes. There were two whales swimming in the sea, one big and one small. They were surrounded by a group of sea fish. The big whale rubbed its head against the little whale's head. Watching the many colorful fish surrounding the little whale and slowly sinking to the bottom of the sea. When the whale falls, everything comes alive. It's really hard to calm down!

It's so beautiful, the writing is so delicate. The plot is closely linked and attracts this person. Kuaishuan is about not being too fast-paced and having a story and emotions. You are great, author. Keep up the good work. Waiting for update...🌺🌺

It's so beautiful. The second scene, Whale Fall, is so good that I cry. I beg for a perfect sequel. Ji Nanshu and his brother live a carefree life together. Li Chen is irrelevant. Gu Huai and Nan Shu have always been good friends.

I have no choice but to fall into Lili's hands. Lili really has a very upright outlook on life and can excel in acting anytime and anywhere. He is also very fond of Sanyiyi. The plot of this book does not seem to drag on now. It made me skip a chapter and read it. The author's writing style is also very good. Really, I was tortured. Xiao Beishen didn't hear Lili's words "I love you until death" until he died... Thinking about it makes me burst into tears. The author is great, please urge me to update! ! !

This book is still very readable. I thought I was immune to reading abuse articles, but Whale Luo still made me break my guard. I hope this article will become more and more readable. Good luck, author＾0＾~

Help! ! ! , The author abused me so much that my heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys ached. I couldn't stop crying from the beginning. Sometimes I thought Wei Li was too unfeeling, but then I thought about it and thought it was right. After reading it, I suddenly felt so tired and exhausted. The author's writing style is really good, and the description of the protagonist is just right. It's a bit thicker and a bit lighter. If anyone comes across this book, you must read it. There is nothing bad about it, and the ending is just right. I think it is very good. Big cheers for the author!

I have been reading this for a long time. It is the only novel that I have read completely in the past few months. To be honest, every world is very interesting, but I cried in only one world. I don't know why, maybe because I am mentally fragile in the morning. Haha, I like Li'er's character who can pick it up and put it down. I also like those lines: "I hide the rose behind me, the flower is silent, but my heart is moved." "The moment I choose you, no matter the ending is good or bad, it is my choice. , I just miss my high-spirited self." The writing style is really good. If I had this writing style, I wouldn't have to be rewritten by the teacher all the time. Woo woo Oops, I forgot to mention, I really like the open ending. Their story continues, and we accompany them for a journey, which is already very good. Their lives are decided by them. I really love it.

Five-star courtesy, respect every creator Then let's lay out this article. I didn't finish reading it, so I watched the first world. Personally, I think the author's writing style is relatively new and there is a lot of room for improvement. There is no other meaning. Everyone is taking it step by step. I just browsed around and no one seemed to say, let me see if it is okay to make a suggestion. Here are some specific suggestions, but I think they are insufficient. 1: The plot is too hasty. To be honest, I have done what I needed to explain, but it always feels like I just brushed it off. 2: The characterization is not clear enough. I know that the protagonist is white and black, but when the protagonist is acting, we can actually intersperse more of the protagonist's true feelings, so that the black is highlighted while the white is white. To put it bluntly, it is contrast. 3: The emotional changes of the characters are not delicate enough. Well, I don't have much experience with this, but the author wants to find more articles to improve it. 4. The transition is abrupt. In fact, you can use asterisks, ellipses, dashes, etc. To create a gap in connection. Okay, the above are my personal suggestions, because I only read one plane and I don't know if the writing will get better as time goes by. If there are improvements, I won't tell you. If there are still similar problems, I still hope that the author can make more improvements on these issues, so that we can go further.

Looks good... Looks good! ! It's just that the update speed is a bit impressive, but it's so beautiful. (QAQ) The ball speed is even faster! !

Ah! ! ! So pretty! ! ! The sadomasochistic love affair is so beautiful, even though it is sadistic, I can't help but look good! ! ! Big cheers for the author! ! ! I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen next!

It's really beautiful! Although I didn't like the scumbag at first. But after you think about it, it's still very beautiful. A type that gets more exciting the more you watch it. "No one is afraid of pain, they are just used to pain." Not every flower has its flowering season, and not everyone stays where they are. Human nature is complicated. When you take advantage of him, how do you know that he is not taking advantage of you? Love does not distinguish between genders, love is love, and you cannot touch that minefield just because the law does not recognize it. You didn't break the law, but you violated morality. Oh, by the way, there is one that has been greatly updated by the author, which is a little slow. (￣ε(#￣)~The previous chapter was updated a month ago

The writing is very interesting. Not all endings have to be HE, Shuang Jie. Originally I didn't read books that weren't Shuang Jie, but after reading the author's comments, I thought it was nothing. In today's society, there are still people who are clean and unclean. The writing is really good [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

The writing is so special to me! ! The plot is also very exciting and the setting is great! ! ! Come on, madam! ! ! ! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The male protagonist Wei Li is a man who must avenge his enemies and repay his kindness. He restored the original owners he possessed. Most of the original owners were killed by their loved ones, and a small number of the original owners were killed because the other party (not the lover) did something that changed his life. Wei Li wanted the people he loved to experience what the original owner had experienced, and made them pay the price, but it would not affect other people's gains in the previous world. Wei Li seems to be very big-hearted, but in fact he is very careful. The set up is perfect, and the acting skills are even more exquisite. The binding system, Trinity, is also super cute. As they enter more and more worlds, they come into contact with Xiao Li'er more and more. With Xiao Li'er's efforts, San Yi Yi transforms from a cute novice to a veteran, and has a strong desire to survive [laughing] There are not many chapters in each small world, but they are very exciting and a little sad (for the author himself). I really like this book. It would be better if it could be updated on time in March (it would be okay if it is not on time, as long as it is updated).

I usually don't have much patience for reading, so I thought it would be more convenient to read a quick time travel book so I could experience different stories. I also read a lot of fast-travel novels one after another in the past year, at least 15 of them, including some famous fast-travel novels. But this novel is really good. The story is fascinating, and I was immediately hooked after reading the first chapter. The plot is not the same as other novels, but has its own characteristics. The writing style is also more brilliant and smooth than other fast-travel novels that appear to be produced by an assembly line. And I can feel that the protagonist is flesh and blood and the image is more three-dimensional, not ruthless or charming. I think everything is just right, author, come on ٩(๑^o^๑)۶ Well, I usually read the beginning and end like a text. If I can, I will read the whole article. I read it on the computer before when I was fishing in school. I added it to my bookshelf when I came back. I almost forgot, hahahaha ^_^

The content is easy to understand. It's the most natural thing I've ever seen. It's not bad.

This book is so beautiful! ! ! ! 😍The author actually thinks it would be better without CP😊😘

It's so beautiful, it's so good at torturing a scumbag, the first plane looks great, but why did you sacrifice yourself for the scumbag? Feeling sad😣😣

It's super good. I prefer BE. Although it was very sad in the early stage, I really enjoyed it when I saw the crematorium where I chased my wife. I hope the author will work hard to update it, but also pay attention to rest and don't get tired. I love you, love you, mum~

It's extremely sadistic, especially tear-jerking, but it's very interesting, the writing and the characters are all good, just don't continue to abuse the male protagonist to death, break through, slowly abuse it back, abuse the scumbag! Come on, author (≧∇≦), you are a scumbag! ! ! !

It's so beautiful, every chapter makes me cry, woo XX

The scene with Yan Jing made me cry the hardest. Maybe it's because I have a deeper empathy. I feel the ending is a bit similar to my own. The person I like cheated on her during this relationship, but he was rekindling an old relationship, while Qin Zhuohan was looking for someone new. [The moment I choose you, no matter the ending is good or bad, it is my choice. I just miss the high-spirited self a little bit. ] This is what I want to say to myself. In the past, I lowered my lower limit again and again in order to find an answer to keep him, but no matter what, he was still the person I really liked and held in my heart. Wow wow wow wow I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, I finished it in one morning [crying]

This book is really good-looking. Every time when I read about to be tortured, I have an illusion, as if Wei Li is not the fast-traveling mission, but the original owner. He truly puts himself into the original owner, but he never misses it. His determination to break away from the mission world has always made me like it. This is the first torture novel that I read from beginning to end without skipping the chapter of Rang He.

This is a book I read last year or the year before last. The plot is blurry. I only remember that it was really good. Among them, Whale Luo was the most amazing to me. Now I read a lot of people recommending abuse articles and have forgotten about this book. It's quite sad. Fewer and fewer people read such a good book. I have always liked to read books with tomatoes. The only ones in tomatoes that really tortured me were Wei Tang and Wei Li. I watched it the year before last or two years ago

Nice! Good 👀! I love this type of novel so much! The final open ending is also very good! ~(´▽｀~)~(Torture me to death