As a Girl, I Want to Become a Sword Immortal

First of all, thank you for your support. Because of your comments and gifts, I feel full of motivation! Because I was still editing the article, I replied to the message a little later. Either the author didn't reply or he might have been editing the article or something and didn't see it.

Everyone shout Lily Lily with me. ˃ ˄ ˂̥̥

So far it looks pretty good, I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. Regarding the main character, I think it's best if she's single. She doesn't need to be a lily or get married. She can have someone who admires her. 2. Don't make the protagonist's character too masculine. It can be a little bit, but it's best not to have it. After all, what I want to see is a girl cultivating immortality, not a tomboy cultivating immortality. If it's too masculine, it's better to go straight to a male-oriented character. 3. The protagonist is a good-looking girl, so that should be reflected. Don't use those cliche plots of slaps in the face. After reading so many fairy tales, the good-looking girls in them are treated very well. It is best not to write a supporting character who looks down on the protagonist and then the protagonist slaps him in the face. I think it can be written as an image with talent, good looks, and the admiration of many people. In addition, you can write about the troubles caused by the protagonist's own appearance and talent under certain circumstances. 4. Try to write as long as possible, and describe the region in a grand way, such as the four major domains and the central sacred domain and the ancient forbidden land, the Hundred Thousand Mountains, the Ten Thousand Demonic Forests, the Demonic Domain, the God Burial Valley, and the final land. The author can create his own ideas and learn from them. 5. You can write more race, but don't write it in a messy way. I hope the author can write better and better, I'm optimistic about you

To be honest, you can quickly pass your childhood. Generally, in this kind of cultivation, you will become an adult at 15 years old. You can directly pass it to 13 or 14 years old, and your appearance will be better. The author is great

Those who want to read "Change Marriage" please go to "Women's Channel". Among "Male Channels", only "Lily" is the orthodox one. And almost all female channel novels are about "Change Marriage", okay, what's wrong with having more Lily? ? Also, the protagonist is originally a man, but there are always some "rotten girls" in this evil society who "make the male protagonist be with another "man"!!"

It is best to be single, and then there are one or two men who like the heroine.

Join me in calling for marriage change! Change marriage! Change marriage! (｢･ω･)｢Hey

Author, can the author make Xiao Qing, the little girl in the system, and the protagonist look like micro lilies, so that it feels like CP?

As long as I don't get married, I will keep this good review.

This book is good. I give it five stars. I hope it can be updated with 3,000 to 4,000 words every day.