Global Beast Taming: I Have a Divine Pet Evolution System

It's a brainless and cool novel, I don't dare to dig out the details at all, and it also has the meaning of a harem novel (test the poison with yourself, be careful! Be careful! Be careful!)

Is this heroine too holy? When everyone else is about to kill you, you still stop the male protagonist from killing him? I really can't stand it

Personally, I think it's a little bit toxic. The male and female protagonists are very annoying at first, but then the female protagonist suddenly fights the male protagonist with her spiritual pet, or because the female protagonist feels that the male protagonist is seducing her best friend. . Not long after that in the morning, she asked the male protagonist to carry her on his back without any guilt.

It's my favorite genre, but the plot is nothing outstanding. I suggest the author add some daily plots, otherwise it will be too compact. ^O^

Doesn't it matter whether there is a female protagonist or not? There must be a woman

I came in after reading the introduction, thinking there was some bonus plot, but I didn't expect it to be a serious monster-fighting and upgrading stream. I don't have to waste time on lsp. There's nothing you want to see.

The evolution route can be changed, which is quite poisonous. It doesn't matter bloodline, skills, talents, or form. Just changing it several times after evolving it is equivalent to directly changing a spiritual pet.

It's really not that good, there are too many typos, and this fox is so poisonous. It can also be exchanged and evolved in three directions, and its attributes are different. Moreover, the male protagonist's character is a bit too easy to be manipulated, and he is not calm at all. Fortunately, if it were true, all the scum would have been killed long ago.

It's a passing thing. For major details, typos should be changed as much as possible. The plot should not be shortened or omitted. It is necessary to grasp the reality and logic. I was really hasty on the evolutionary route. I chose a branch, just like a fork in the road. Once you enter one of the roads, you can never go back and go through another fork. This is about logic. It should be reasonable in the reader's first consideration. As for how Reasonable, the character's personality should be clearly created, and for no other reason than to deepen the impression, make people feel like the first person, and think that if they were the protagonist of the novel, they would do the same. After reading your chapters, the number of chapters is named after the serial number. A thousand chapters or more, according to the current level, is not far from the later stage, so I want to say that the pace is too fast. If you want to place a new level, the overall situation may be asymmetrical. You can write a big turning point or a central event. If you use drag-and-drop on a fast-paced basis, there will be a sharp contrast. You can only do it to the end. According to the real possibility of the plot, how to do it depends on your outline. It is not easy to interfere with this thing. After all, it is your own. Success or failure is more or less experience. I hope you can stabilize it. Well, actually I'm still looking forward to it. I've read a few similar books and I think you have a better chance. Come on (update quickly)щ(゜ロ゜щ)

From the plot in Entering the Secret Realm, the wrong square is one. I don't want to say anything yet. As a result, your N words that should be equally divided are all marked as squares. You quickly change the squares to equal parts. It's really uncomfortable to see. Did you make a mistake in Wubi input or Quanpin input or did your Chinese teacher teach it wrong? . . , After the modification, I will delete the four-star rating and replace it with five-star rating. If you don't read the book review rating, then I am too lazy to delete it!