Quick Transmigration: The Host Is Acting All Wrong

It's good-looking, I like the first aspect, but it's a bit messy. At first I thought the three Song family members would play with the male protagonist together, and I was a little excited. But later I found out that I was wrong. It turns out that Shou is only loyal to Gong, ugh~. The second plane is also very good-looking. It's so sweet that I like it so much. Keep up the good work, but you should also pay attention to your health💓💓

Beautiful, this is a good article! I hope you will pick up this book. The emotions are real. Every story will make you cry, but it is also very sweet. It can be said to be both painful and happy. I read this article quickly because it's so interesting! So I can't tell you some details, but I can say that the storyline is novel and the protagonist setting is very popular. Especially the possessiveness of the protagonist is exciting, and the character of the other party really pokes me. This article doesn't make any sense! Woo hoo hoo, it's so sweet, my beads are falling while watching it [covers mouth]. Come on, this article is the most satisfying among my many collections. Although I have many collections, I only read a few of them often.

It's great, but it's very similar to the paranoid villain in a suspense novel who wants to monopolize me [Quick Time Travel], especially the first plane. It may be an illusion. I still choose to believe the author. The author writes very well. Come on!

Awesome, I like it so much You are the fireworks in the world, you are the only one in my heart There's a world of difference here, I believe you will choose me After all you are smart, aren't you!

When I first watched the first scene, I was so tortured that I didn't want it. I was about to give up, but when I saw the introduction, it said that the first plane could be skipped, so I looked at the next plane with uneasiness. It was super sweet, so sweet that I didn't want it. The author is great. Fortunately, I read the introduction, otherwise I would have missed this wonderful novel! Do you want to trick me to death so that you can inherit my bookshelf [Dog Head Saves Life]

Although the first plane is chewing glass candy 🍬, the next one is definitely sweet! ! ! Go! ! !

The writing is delicate and warm, and the situation is not cliche. It will not make people like me who love to throw away books feel impatient. A very good fast travel novel

I've read it all, it's good. The ending is a bit quick, I hope the next book will be longer. By the way, will your next book be a quick travel novel?

It's a good article. Here are some suggestions for the author. The logical content of the article is a little unclear. Maybe the story lines and emotional lines of the first few planes were written a little too fast. Each plane feels a bit rushed. The emotional lines of the two protagonists are a bit too fast. The protagonist's character is a little broken. Secondly, I really can't stand this new plane of octopus. The plot is a bit draggy. Maybe the author has made changes after reading previous comments that the story is too fast. But We can try to speed up the story a little bit on this basis, and we can appropriately delete unnecessary plots, such as the number of appearances of Ellen, or slightly reduce the degree of octopus's influence on the protagonist. Although it is good to have some reservations about Ron's identity or to create some suspense, if it keeps the reader's appetite, it will make people feel a little disgusted. You can try to delay Ron's strange feeling later, or write Ron's feelings for the protagonist more intensely, which may make people feel better. But it's great for newbies! Come on! ! I hope you write better and better~

It's beautiful and very sweet, but I'm sorry for one thing. I always thought that the title of the book and the cover were messed up by the author. After recommending it to a friend, she asked me why I couldn't find it (><) (dog head saves life🐶)