Something's Off About My Spirit
我的精灵不对劲
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 491k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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The novel is very well-written and nuanced. When I got to the part about Miao Miao's past, I felt I couldn't continue reading. This is because, for my personal reasons, I think my psychological resilience is not strong enough. When I saw those two girls being humiliated and powerless to do anything about it, I could feel their despair and their determination to become stronger.
This novel ranks second in my heart, probably because I prefer the protagonist's path to success, which isn't as smooth as others and involves some setbacks. Maybe it's also because I've read too many stories of protagonists getting their comeuppance, and I've suddenly come to appreciate this kind of understated, dramatic storytelling.
It's a great read, with a slow pace and excellent writing. However, I didn't understand the ending, and I was also confused about where Ye Ranran went later on. Personally, I felt the ending was a bit rushed, and many foreshadowing elements from the beginning weren't explained clearly.
It's really good; it's one of the better-looking ones here. I just don't understand why the rating is so low. Also, the development of the mythical beasts seems a bit too fast.
Hey, author, Ouyang Nannan can't die! Otherwise it wouldn't be perfect.
Author, I hope you can write a happy ending. Overall, it's a great novel, but as some reviews have pointed out, the beginning was a bit weak while the later parts were excellent, but they missed that because of the beginning. I don't want the ending to be as boring as the beginning. Keep it up, author!
Is this a harem novel? Does anyone know? How many female characters are there?
The ending of this novel is alright. Some people might not understand it, but I think it's the best ending. The book leaves a mystery for the reader to imagine... You'll probably imagine a positive outcome, right? An ending can't satisfy all readers.
I think changing the title to "My Mythical Beast is Addicted to the Internet" would be more fitting o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o
I feel this is one of the best Pokémon games I've seen so far. The Meowth is well-developed, the main characters are well-developed, and there haven't been any mindless or nonsensical games.