National Fate: Starting with Pain's Deva Path as a Teammate Who Doesn't Understand Love

So far, the writing is pretty good, but my personal suggestion is to try to reduce some of the so-called netizen comments, which are a bit dramatic. In addition, there is too little written, so the more explosive, the more explosive!

Come on, I hope there won't be a harem and someone as strong as Pain?

Can the next template include Obito Six Paths or several navy generals or one-punch man without emotions 😂 Personally, I like to read it, but if you don't like it, don't comment 🙏🙏🙏

Good guy, I give it a five-star rating

Big cheers for the author!

It's very good. This is the first national sports novel about Payne that I've seen. Most of the comments are that the plot kills the audience, and there are very few opportunities for the players to perform, so I think this distribution is not reasonable, but overall it is still very good. I am very optimistic about this novel and the author. Come on

Update quickly. When I wake up tomorrow morning, I want to see 100 unread chapters. It's not too much.

Is the protagonist curvy or straight?

The author should update it as soon as possible, otherwise you will be divided into eight sections by me

I want to know if there is one person behind... Or there will be Payne's team. How did you set up this author, the reincarnation eye, etc., Right?