Mrs. Nan's Secret Identity Is Unstoppable

It was okay at the beginning, but then it got worse and I became more and more unbearable. 1. The plot was too cumbersome, and the second one came before even finishing one thing, and it ended hastily. 2. It was inconsistent, saying that the heroine couldn't dance, but later she danced very well. 3. There were too many characters in the waistcoat. The main character of Dragon Gate could not beat the second male lead, but she could still be thrown against the wall by the second male lead? 4 As long as it's a vest, just write a few chapters, not connected in series. Is the outline based on the vest? Academic master, piano, hacker, dragon gate, design, godfather is the richest man, game god, stock god, miracle doctor vest. Can the author write so many vests?? 5 The heroine is weak in the later stage? Will the dragon master be weak? Also, the heroine is the main driver I was so harsh at the beginning. Please tell me where I was so harsh. Others apologized and then forgiven me. Apart from killing a few people in Longmen, how could I be so cruel? 6 Isn't he a car god? Why is it that any bodyguard's driving skills are as good as the heroine's? Then why didn't the male protagonist learn the skills from the bodyguard earlier and look for a car god instead? 7 The male protagonist's mother doesn't like the female protagonist because of her status. , But the heroine's grandfather also said that he was married, so why didn't he talk about the financial status of the heroine's grandparents? Are they really from the countryside?... I'm so salivating that I said it's too much. In comparison, the male protagonist is not worthy of the heroine. He can only save people and not block. The heroine is so powerful, why is Zhang Zhang getting hurt?

It's really good-looking. I checked Douyin by chance and thought it was pretty good, so I gave it a try. Unexpectedly, it turned out to be quite good-looking! ! ! Looking forward to looking forward to

How should I put it? Maybe it's because I've read too many novels, and I always felt that something was missing. The writing style was a bit childish, and I didn't feel that the heroine was very powerful.

The first part is pretty good, but the middle part shows that the heroine is too weak. She always talks about things without saying anything, and was plotted three times, but she didn't show her own strength, so that the things that happened to the heroine later didn't show her own strengths.

Keep emphasizing the various identities of the heroine, but the result is that she is a rookie

This is the most speechless novel I have ever read. The heroine's vest didn't work even once, so it was dangerous. Her dragon gate power is useless. It's still the male lead who has so many identities. You can still easily put yourself in danger. It is also said that the heroine has received very strict military training and so on. But her mind is very unstable, she is not decisive at all, and she is not skillful enough! Why. Disappointment

There are some small innovations in the plot, but the writing style is a little inferior, the expression is not very natural, and the plot is a bit deliberate, but I still give the author a thumbs up, writing a book is not easy! Come on!

It really attracted me at first, but after reading it, I want to tell you that it is really nonsense. The heroine has a double degree, and then takes a series of exams in China. I am really confused. How can you go to high school after having a double degree and a diploma? Putting this aside, the heroine's grandfather and the hero's grandfather are family friends, and the heroine's family is obviously not bad. Later, the hero's mother dislikes that the heroine comes from the country? ? ? But there is no problem if you think about the plot carefully. There are more nonsense. The beginning is really exciting and eye-catching. There are many characters with weak vests.

The heroine's characterization does not match her behavior. She has so many vests, so she must be a very smart, cool and sassy person. As a result, each vest seems to be forcibly put on her body. Her behavior is not smart at all, like a little white flower. She is not aware of other people's traps. She can be framed by others every time, and she has been injured many times. Moreover, the vest fell too fast. It started to fall off after only a few chapters. Around twenty chapters, the male protagonist and several male supporting characters began to have feelings for her. This article has more than 600 chapters. Don't you think the plot was written too fast? It feels like the male protagonist and male supporting characters are very frivolous in their love. And sometimes the plot is inconsistent, and some places are not explained, and the span is huge. Anyway, I gave up after reading dozens of chapters. It's not the kind of cool novel about strong women that I thought.

My own thoughts Heck, I've read a lot of novels, and every time I read the comments I hesitate to read them. Most of them are trolls about the author's bad writing, and I still want to write it myself! Suddenly I realized, forget it, I don't want to be scolded! Evaluation I read the previous one, and I think it's pretty good. Maybe the author is a novice, but it's pretty good for someone to write like this. Not everyone can write very well! Please understand, after all, the author is very tired of coding [laughs awkwardly] [Personal suggestion, please do not comment]