1937. In this era that filled every descendant of Yan and Huang with grief, most people chose to flee and give ground. Some even helped the enemy and became traitors. But at this critical moment, when the entire Chinese nation was in peril, many more chose another path: to fight the Japanese to the bitter end, and never lay down their weapons until the invaders were defeated. Everyone’s fate changed along with that age of raging flames and fervent passion, for better or worse. In any case, their lives strayed from their original course.
It's a complete mess, full of typos, and the character descriptions are all exaggerated.
You stopped writing halfway through the beating, didn't you? You should at least write about him joining the Red Army!