Death Comes Calling: From the Start, I’m on Death’s Countdown

There are too many bugs and there is something wrong with the framework. If you want to write Death Comes, read Death Comes. At least you can learn from the various unexpected ways of death in Death Comes. As soon as you arrive, you will die in simple and crude ways such as myocardial infarction, lightning strike, explosion, and possession. It's hard to see anything. Moreover, the protagonist is useless and the system is also useless. Finally, the safe house of the Divine Guard Bureau is also a joke. Take a look at the safe house where Death Comes. It's all soft-packed and there are no sharp metal objects. There is a mirror in your safe house, how funny is that?

It took me half a day to read it, but the idea is good, but I have too little common sense. Drones are actually rubbish. Nowadays, scientific and technological satellites can find out how many hairs you have on your body. It is absolutely certain how many satellites can be adjusted to watch you. The number of people in your family who will be watched is a matter of calculation. And you have to save the powerful because they have nuclear bombs. And the country definitely has think tanks and the like. You just have to die and someone will come to save you. You don't have to think about it. The fallacies that lead to it are all outdated things. As long as the number of deaths does not exceed the number of births, the whole world will not know about it. Even though the writing is not good, I will give it 5 stars.

Gee, I finally understand why the rating is so low and so few people read it. I couldn't stand it after reading about 10 chapters. I don't understand why books nowadays are only about women and are ambiguous. Can't live without women? I thought I could read a book on a new subject, but this is what happened? Not every book needs a heroine and an ambiguous character, tsk

Generally speaking, it's okay. The idea is good, but there are quite a lot of poison points. The system ability is really useless, and it has to take the last few seconds to save you. The enemy of death's biggest ability in the early stage is to allow you to survive from the hands of death, which is useless.

It is purely a book written by children, both in terms of emotions and characterization, especially Ning Xue, which really disgusts me. It would be better to write about her as the daughter of the richest man, but with autism, and being protected by the protagonist and gradually becoming inseparable from the protagonist. To be more pure, a 13-year-old bookworm was poisoned to death.

I asked why such a relatively interesting subject matter has such a low rating. I can barely make up for the missing chapters in the first part, but the large and messy passages with unclear meaning at first glance are directly generated by AI, and there is no logic at all.

About a year has passed, This book has no ratings yet. I really don't know what's going on? After all, this is a novel with more than 700 chapters, so these are the only ratings. Is it a book from somewhere else? [Thinking]

A lot of content is repeated. Moreover, the protagonist is very good and has not posed any threat to the God of Death so far. That's all.

There are too many bugs and there is something wrong with the framework. If you want to write Death Comes, read Death Comes. At least you can learn from the various unexpected ways of death in Death Comes. As soon as you arrive, you will die in simple and crude ways such as myocardial infarction, lightning strike, explosion, and possession. It's hard to see anything. Moreover, the protagonist is useless and the system is also useless. Finally, the safe house of the Divine Guard Bureau is also a joke. Take a look at the safe house where Death Comes. It's all soft-packed and there are no sharp metal objects. There is a mirror in one of your safe houses. This is another message in the comment area. I will continue to add.

? ? ? Forcibly adding a female protagonist? Falling in love right away? ? ? What the hell