Living Jade, Heavenly Fragrance

Your style shouldn't end like this. It's too hasty. It's just the beginning.

Very well written!

No, I'm too tired and don't look good.

This novel looks really tiring, written by a primary school student.

The male protagonist is too much of a dog licker, a bit bitchy

This is the second time

It's so ugly,

Exaggerated brushwork is used a lot,

It's so long-winded,

Grinding, grinding, a few small pieces of garbage half-watered books