The Pitiful One’s Quick Transmigration Comeback Guide

It's a nice article, but it's a bit unfinished. Big boost to the author!

I don't know why the rating is so low, it's obviously very good-looking! Even five stars seems low to me.

It's beautiful! The author's views are very upright without any fancy points. It's very beautiful. The heroine has a very good personality and is very straightforward. I like it very much!!! There are no emotional scenes involved, and there are no bloody plots such as seducing the scumbag gang to pet Neptune. It is purely non-CP. This is the correct way to open the novel without CP! I like to read this kind of book that focuses on the plot. The only drawback is that each story ends very hastily, which makes me feel like the app has not been uploaded. I want to report an error😂 I hope the author will create more works and follow me!

I don't understand why such a good-looking novel has such a low rating. There are a lot of bad ones mixed in with the high rating, but it's good. If you're interested, come in and take a look. It's guaranteed to be good.

The previous worlds are very good and have controversial issues, but I don't know why the latter worlds are not finished. I don't know whether it's because I'm not qualified enough or I can't understand them. Then I feel that the ending is very rushed. Of course, it's also possible that I'm not mature enough and can't understand the deeper meaning.

As an omnivore, this is a good novel. The ending is a little hasty, and the overall progress is too fast. There are pitfalls but not buried. I feel that it would be better to expand the story line and write it in more detail. The plot is quite thoughtful, and there are a few extras that I feel are quite good. Personally, I like General Zhenguo and the extras. I was quite moved after watching it, and I felt a little uncomfortable. I recommend watching it. But the whole series of games can't help but make people feel a little strange. It feels like a flashback kill comes before the main text is over. It's a bit unfinished and seems to have nothing to do with the main plot. The ending is a bit abrupt from the main plot. In the end, I only explained the life experience of the heroine. The so-called main god and shadow were not elaborated too much, which was a bit vague. Moreover, the heroine's revenge was not mentioned at the end. It felt like it was supposed to be a big game of chess, but in the middle, I got impatient and just threw the chessboard and quit. The heroine's setting was a bit broken in the later stages. Because it had to conform to the original owner's design (I quite like this setting), I felt that the image of Shiro Kirokui was not that distinct. In the end of the world, I felt that the heroine's presence was not high (it is not high in the later stages. If there is no inner drama of the heroine, people will think that she is another person). It is basically rare in the later stages of the system. There is also the character of the little liar, who was originally thought to play a certain role in the later stage. Before the three questions were asked, he completely disappeared later. There is also a small problem with the person pronouns. She and he are not distinguished, which leads to the inability to determine/misjudgment of the gender of the characters during reading, which is a bit uncomfortable. The author's writing style is really good, and the sense of immersion is very strong. Even though there are many shortcomings, I didn't give it away. If you have the patience to read it during a book shortage, it is also a good choice. Some topics are quite profound, and digging deeper into the purpose of the article will elevate it to a higher level.

I think it's great, except the ending is a little bit bad, but overall it's great, I quite like it.

No, the book written by this author is really in line with my taste. I like it so much, I like it so much, I like it so much

How should I put it, this book is accelerating its completion. I just finished the Small World mission, and I reviewed why the heroine bombed the God's Domain, and that's it. He didn't say whether he went back in the end, or what happened to the small system in the end.

This host is comparable to Shu Wan. He has a gentle and kind appearance, and he knows what he knows. However, the small system is very cute, and Shu Wan and her little guinea pig have a great background. I don't know what kind of god this host is. I look forward to the heroine's big move later!