From the Start: I Own a Haunted House

Compared with the horror house stories I've read before, it's still a bit worse. His story was very immersive, but yours doesn't have a strong sense of immersion.

Highly recommended I Have a House of Horrors

You can't even read from the book. It's so good that you can copy it like this from a good book called "I Have an Adventure House"🌶🐓

What's the mess behind? The names of the protagonists are all different, and they are not written in detail. They are just described in a vague way.

I recommend "I Have an Adventure House", everyone who understands it

This looks like it was copied and pasted, and the protagonist's name is also changed here and there.

It's a complete mess. In the beginning, except for the character of the male protagonist who was not very comfortable to watch, the logic became more and more confusing. At first, it was said that the heroine's house was in another place and she needed to fly there. Later, it changed to the same city. Moreover, the protagonist didn't remember to tell fortunes every day and didn't bring a tablet with him every time he went out. He looked like a fool seeking death. Starting from Xuecheng, the protagonists are fucking changed. The names are all messed up, and the locations change at any time. The plot was good at first, but then the logic was confusing and sporadic. I don't recommend it at all.

The author, please come out soon. Can you please remove the heroine? Everything else is fine. Even if there is a female protagonist, her presence must not be strong

What the hell did I write in the end? Suddenly the main character's name changed. It's so weird.

It's really just so-so, this is a sadistic article, and it also uses the horror house brand. It's okay for you to unlock new scenes and abuse the host, but you run a horror house. What is a horror house for? Of course it is to scare tourists. You actually used less than 50 words to finish the part of scaring tourists. You just talked about how the tourists were scared. That's the process. You have to change the title of your book to Horror Resurgence Protagonist Survival Battle Royale. Just use the heat from the air conditioner. The most important thing about this kind of book is the scary atmosphere that tourists bring to the horror house in the book. Decrypting layers of horrific scenes with the protagonist brings visitors and readers more and more terrifying mental stimulation. The tourists in the book were scared to death, and the readers outside the book couldn't hold back their urine in the middle of the night and didn't dare to go to the bathroom. I don't dare to sleep alone, and I don't dare to look under the bed. I turn over for fear of seeing a strange face behind me.