A Tycoon System, Yet It Insists I Become a Superstar

Chapters 23, 24, 31, 35, and 39 have been preliminarily revised regarding the character plot of Xia Chuyun. If there are any bugs, please give us feedback.

Ahem, here comes the long review! ① The opening chapter does not have the cliché of being dumped by a gold-digger girl. Instead, the heroine gets leukemia and is forced to break up. This is a good outline of the relationship between the heroine and the protagonist's predecessor. Although this is very familiar, it is not as disgusting as those plots of being dumped by a gold-digger girl, let alone bloody. I don't understand the book friends who complained about this. Maybe they also vomited that kind of plot, but in my opinion, this kind of plot will not detract from the book. ② The protagonist continues to be with his former girlfriend. I think the author made this point very obvious. In layman's terms, the original person is exactly the same person in the protagonist's parallel space. There is almost no difference in origin. What's more, the protagonist has inherited the emotions of the predecessor. The protagonist can already say that he is not exactly the protagonist before time travel. He already has the emotions of the original person and can be said to be an evolved version of the original person. So is it difficult to understand that accepting the original girlfriend? It's really hard for me to understand the point in the comments that the protagonist is a taker. ③There is also a criticism in the comment area that the protagonist goes to the company without being neatly dressed and disrespects others. First of all, it didn't mention how much the protagonist was ridiculed. Just pretend you don't care. The author didn't even mention it. Why don't you find something to do? Secondly, he didn't go to the company to work. He went to clean up the scum. Do you need to wear formal clothes to clean up the scum? He also didn't show off in front of the collective employees. The plot of disrespecting others is not reflected in the book. What are they talking about? ④Well, I saw the corrected version of this ambiguous issue. It's obviously the author's fault here. The author's details are not in place, so I feel that this kind of love is very inexplicable. I feel that this kind of plot is unnecessary, but the author still cuts it very quickly. This woman only appeared in a few chapters, so it is not a negative plot. ⑤ There are no other problems with the rest. This book can be considered top-notch in terms of entertainment, but the plot has not yet unfolded. Let's look at the follow-up. There are no commendable problems with Shenhao. It is just average, but it will not deduct points. As for the system, it is very good. It's spiritual, and it's quite interesting. Book lovers who are entangled in the problem of the system need not do it. The rules of the system are artificially stipulated, and they can be strong or weak. I have seen overbearing systems, and it's a change of taste. Not to mention that there is a fierce man next door who turns the system into his wife~(￣▽￣~)~ ⑥The overall evaluation of this book is very good in the entertainment category of Tomato. At least based on the current 100 chapters, the score of Tomato's entertainment books is generally very low. I think this book can at least pass a 9. Well, one final word, for the book friend who said that he has read the book for 10,000 hours on three mobile phones, I just want to say that the first five chapters of this book are quite satisfactory and there is no bad plot. Why is it too bad! One star? Could it be that the entertainment score of Tomato is generally low because... Hiss... It's so scary! Goodbye! Retreat!

If you don't have a harem, don't write about so many women. It's so uncomfortable. I support the author and don't follow the theory of a harem. Come on, come on, come on! ! ! !

I originally wanted to review it after reading a hundred chapters, but currently there are only sixty chapters. The sixty chapters are a bit short, so I can't find any faults. As an online novel, the emphasis is on entertainment. It's enough that we can understand it. Having said so much, let me think about some of the advantages of this book: 1. It is not like a white text. 2. Most of the works selected for publication are very classic. 3. There is no such trick as pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. The only drawback is that there are too few chapters, and some people may cause trouble when I go to the United States. I don't know if the author can handle it well. Looking forward to

The book written by the author may not satisfy everyone's taste, but for me, this book is really good. Come on, author.

It feels very good to read, and the thinking is quite clear, just like the kind of old author's clear thinking without water characters. When I read it, I felt familiar, as if I had seen it somewhere before. I don't know why I had this idea. It is also worth recommending. The rating is low at the moment. The author hopes to work hard and hope that it will not be unfinished or eunuch. The most afraid thing is that the front part is very good and the back part is good, but you guys understand anyway.

I originally thought it was a pretentious article, but I didn't expect that the power of words is so great and touching.

Hahaha, what a great work! This system and the male protagonist are so fun, especially when the two of them are quarreling. I couldn't help but give it five stars after seeing a few pictures. It suits my taste. Big boost for the author! Update update

It's pretty good. It's better to watch this in one day, but I want to ask, is it a single heroine or not? Not better (ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)(ಡωಡ)

The writing is quite good, but the updates are too slow. One chapter may not be updated every two or three weeks😓