Invincible from the Moment I Started Devouring

I really like Tomato's Swallowing Starry Sky, and I hope the author won't stop updating it. I finally came across the fan fiction of Swallowing and Coiling Dragon again, and I'm going to follow it!

I thought this book would never come back. I couldn't find it no matter how hard I searched. I accidentally deleted it and couldn't find it. I thought it had been taken off the shelves. After many months, I finally came across it again, but you didn't have it. Why did you delete the ratings? Damn it, Lan Shou, you're wasting my feelings.

This is a novel about human beings. There are many plots in the original book that are exciting and also make people cry. For example, Lu Gang and the war god and the beast tide, the battle with the golden-horned giant beast, the fleet attacking the earth, etc. These are all regrettable plots. And this book allows us to see the scene we most want to see when watching the original work. To sum up, the protagonist is a person of flesh and blood, who has feelings for his family and country, values ​​love and justice, and has an online IQ. Knowing the general direction of the plot, he didn't seize other people's opportunities. When he was powerful, he didn't vent like a stallion. He was passionate and unpretentious, and he was strong-willed and definitely not cowardly. It's just that the writing was too slow. I have read the latest chapter. The author urged me to update it online, otherwise we would have to send the razor blade😤😤

The first novel I read was Swallowing the Starry Sky. I hope the author can continue writing and let me review the classic. The author should not care about other people's opinions and those of us who love reading.

It's rare to see a book with the star-devouring sky as the background, and it's well written. It's not like some books that rob the protagonist of all the opportunities in the original plane, which is rare. I also like the book Swallowing the Stars very much.

I finally understand why this novel has such a low rating. To sum up: the early writing on the earth part is worthy of recognition, and it is a qualified fan novel. I thought the collapse started with the multiverse. Maybe the author himself realized that using too much pen and ink to write about another universe would collapse, so he didn't write too much and just used it as an ordinary plug-in. This was handled very well. What is really unacceptable is that after entering the universe, none of the characters have been established. The result of the innovation is completely different. If some seemingly trendy things are added, it is actually very weird. If the target group is not identified, those who like to devour colleagues cannot bear to have the characters inside being destroyed one after another. As for other groups, your character image has not been established, which is also unacceptable. Looking forward to the next one.

After reading this book, I was very satisfied and found other books boring. I was wrong. I thought there was only one clearing of the starry sky, but I found out that there were many worlds behind it. It feels too messy.

It's very good, I like it very much, but I don't think the description of the characters is particularly good, and the language expression is not particularly good, but overall it is very good, I also like this subject matter, but There are times when you, the author, feel a little sloppy, but overall, I still like it very much. I hope you will continue your work in the future. I will look forward to your new works ^ω^|｡･㉨･)っ♡I like you♪

The book is really good, but it's just a bit unreadable. Authors like fandoms can be a little faster, and the original volume of the original work that swallows the fandoms is enough. I add some of my own elements, and I can actually achieve a large volume...

The author has to work hard. It's been a long time since I've updated. This is the first time I like this fan fiction so much.