Ghost Hunting Around the World: Transformed Into a Little Girl from the Start

It's okay, but what I wrote about the protagonist disappears, and what I write about goes off topic. The protagonist is just like air, and does not exist. So why write about the protagonist →_→? Just write the heroine as the protagonist!

I feel like the protagonist is just a tool. The key is that I can't laugh and have conversations. I can only test my telepathy. It's not really what happened later, but I was persuaded to give up.

The author's content is good, but the protagonist is like a dispensable person. The community of others can occupy the consciousness. The protagonist is just a system. I am speechless =_=. Look at the title "Transformation into a Little Loli at the Beginning". Did you use the word "transformation" wrong? ? ?

I gave 4 stars because the first part was good but the main character disappeared in the second part. I can understand that it is difficult to write two main characters. I hope I can improve it later. After all, I am looking forward to the spark of love when Jiang Xiaohan meets the real protagonist🤤🤤🤤

A very good idea was written off.

It's too off topic, the title is a transformation story, the protagonist is transparent, the heroine can't handle it, so she writes the protagonist out to control the situation, and the passers-by are just mocking, right? If it were written like this for men, it would make sense, but in this context, it doesn't make sense for girls' schools to look down on each other, and rich people can mock the protagonist, right? What about everyone's demeanor, have they been eaten by dogs? Everything I read feels like the author has a grudge against rich people [face covering]

This book is pretty good, but in Chapter 17 the heroine knows she can't beat him but still tries anyway. If the hero hadn't taken action, she would have died at the hands of that ghost. If there wasn't a system, would she still be alive? Give up, give up

The supporting characters are a bit too smart. There are too many characters, three of which can appear in two lines. There are many typos. The protagonist is targeted for strange reasons. The portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters is too thin.

It was fine in the early stage, except that the plot involved the heroine fighting a B-level monster to a certain extent. If the hero hadn't had the system's trump card, the heroine would have failed. The male protagonist in the back is like air, and the updates are too slow

Change the settings. The early settings are the same as the game, but later they become immortals. The reasons why monsters are dropped after defeating monsters in the ghost world are not mentioned later. It looks weird, and the division of realms is not very clear.