Online Game: Have You Heard of the Infinite-Casting Build?

It's pretty good, but some details are still not enough. The talent the protagonist gets is to cancel the casting time. What is the casting time? That thing is the forward swing of the skill, the movement of raising the hand, or the time of spell chanting; then what is the CD? It is called the skill cooling time, which you can understand as the breath adjustment time required after casting the spell. The two are completely different concepts. Take Fireball as an example. Small skills with short cooldown or even no cooldown are acceptable, but you have to at least mention it. You don't even mention it in your skill description, and the same goes for Chain Lightning. The skill description doesn't have a CD. So I asked what the CD of that thing is. Good guy, a lot of people thought that the protagonist's talent is a skill with no CD, so they came to argue with me. The author's idea is good, but! But you still need to think more about the details of writing a book, as details determine success or failure. There is also a woman like me. When I saw you writing about a professional mentor, you got a nympho look. You said it was caused by the reputation value, so I just turned into a question mark face. Don't do it. Can't you just write normally? Do you have to make trouble all the time?

Not bad. It looks okay.

It looks great. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

This book is good, come on author!