One Piece: The Undying Flame

It's a very good novel, with two male protagonists, strong and emotional in writing. Gray's character is also very likable, and it can also foreshadow the original One Piece. Overall, it's very good. I found it and really saved it during the book shortage.

It's a very interesting plot and a very novel setting. Ace travels to the past and meets the protagonist. I'm looking forward to the plot behind it.

Personal opinion: I only read the first 14 chapters and this book is a must-have! As long as it doesn't crash later, this will definitely be one of the best pirate fanfics I've ever read!

The setting of the two male protagonists in this book is more novel than most other books. Neither of the male protagonists are time travellers, but the setting of traveling to the past as native pirates is also more attractive than other fan fictions. It also gave Ace, who died in the war, a new life. There are several shortcomings: There is too much emphasis on the shaping of the two male protagonists and a little less shaping of the supporting roles. The author may not be very good at describing large-scale battle scenes, so there aren't many more subtle battle scenes. Another thing is that there is slightly less development of fruit abilities. Most of the Black Fire Pirates are fruit ability users, but they seem to only use the most basic use of fruit abilities. That is to say, Gray has some superb control power such as setting fire, which can turn two flames into swords, but it feels very short-sighted. But the characters of the two protagonists are very to my liking, and I also like the atmosphere of the pirate group very much, like a class or a dormitory. They are usually noisy and hurt each other, but at critical moments they are extremely united. I look forward to every update of this book. It has the feeling I long for in One Piece. This book has great potential. Please work hard to make this book shine even brighter.

This theme is really new. I have read many Pirates fanfics, but there is a common problem, that is, the protagonist has traveled through time, or is an important character who will greatly affect the original work. 996 Is also very good. It allowed me to see what happened before Luffy. Your book is even better. Isn't reading a book just to see what you don't know? I have finished reading it in one go, and suddenly I don't know what to read. You have to make it up to me. Please update it quickly. I will give you a gift.

I saw the scene between Gray and Cyborg when he was a kid, and it really blew my mind. The portrayal of emotions is quite delicate, and every character has flesh and blood.

The protagonist's image is really contagious and has strong personal charm. It is definitely a book that can confer godhood.

It's really a masterpiece, the theme design is very novel, and the character's personality is very well grasped (especially the part about Gray and Cyborg is very touching). The reviews are all very positive, and it's a five-star rating👊👊👊

It feels like Gray knows what's going to happen in the future. This is the first time I've seen such a heart-warming pirate novel. Come on, the author, don't stop updating. I also hope that Alfred can be saved by Gray and have a good ending. Please. 🙏🙏🙏

The setting is very interesting, I really like Gray's character, I'm a fan of it Hahaha, but when I saw the black and white flames, my inner chubby personality started to burn🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Come on٩(๑^o^๑)۶ (If it is correct to say that there is Ace's history, then will the protagonists in the future be si (tears))