“Ding! Sign-in successful! Congratulations, Host, you've become a top-tier martial artist!”
“Ding! Sign-in successful! Congratulations, Host, you've received the Jianghua Grand Hotel!”
“Ding! Sign-in successful! Congratulations, Host, you've obtained the top-tier martial skill: Concealment!”
“Ding! Sign-in successful! Congratulations, Host, you've mastered the top-tier martial skill: Flight!”
Ye Shaotian transmigrated to a parallel world and rejected the System for five years. On the very last day before the System was about to disappear, his wife, Su Feier, was suddenly kidnapped.
To rescue her and protect himself, Ye Shaotian finally chose to merge with the Sign-In System at the last moment and become a top-tier martial artist.
I am new to writing a book, so please give me your advice.
Looking forward to the follow-up of Ye Shaotian finding Feier! !
Not bad, I think
It feels a little fast. I'm afraid I will only write more than 200 pictures if this continues. Wish there were a little more.
Come on, be awesome!
It looks good, why should I be a super warrior from the beginning?
It's super cool, thank you to the author! !