Tomb Raiding: From the Start, I Could Command Spirits and Dispatch Generals

You obviously have Pangu blood, but you also know that the plot actually revolves around innocence, and you still give money every day. How about you use the money to sell things to your girlfriend and take her to eat something good? , The other person is not your father, and besides, your girlfriend used a few dollars for several days, so you only give her a gift and nothing else, you scumbag.

Does this book have something to do with the title? The whole book revolves around giving money to Wu Xie and Pangu's bloodline. Does it have anything to do with Ju Ling?

Hello Guava, I would like to give you some advice. 1. I hope the author can clearly write down the emotional lines of each harem, and at least have a reason why he likes the protagonist. (Otherwise it would be a bit nonsensical, alas😔The harem is not easy to write about) 2. Although Wu Xie is not the evil emperor of Shahai yet, he is not far behind. He can write a growth line and gradually become stronger. (Don't be too stupid, you blind man. After all, you have lived for such a long time. Otherwise, you will be criticized by caring people🤥) 3. Scene transition to the article — (It will look much more comfortable. I also taught the water character method, tsk tsk tsk) 4. The story line has a purpose. After all, the protagonist needs a reason to go to the grave. (Whether it's signing in or accepting a harem, at least it has a purpose. Otherwise, if the protagonist eats and drinks well and the system doesn't punish him, why would he go to the grave?) Ps: I can only think of so much for the moment. If the author sees it and feels it, just adopt it if it feels good. It doesn't matter if you don't agree. I really like this kind of subject matter. I hope the author will get better and better, and I will continue to follow it. Come on Guava!

If I were the editor of this book, I would definitely pull it out. Most of your book is about giving money to Wu Xie and picking up girls. I really don't know what to say. The mask has many typos and the plot is pieced together. It's very confusing👿👿👿

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To be honest, this is no longer a tomb robbing novel, it has gone out of the scope of tomb robbing. When I got to about 100 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore, and then I skipped reading, and then after about 150 chapters, I couldn't bear to read anymore and gave up.

What can I say? I won't say anything bad. Anyone who can hold on for fifty chapters is a good person. Anyway, I couldn't stand it after reading more than forty chapters.

Oh my gosh, I feel like the writing is becoming more and more like a mythological novel. It doesn't look like a tomb-robbing novel at all. Just like going to a tomb in the previous article is like traveling. You can also say this. The protagonist of the travel book is too invincible, and the original protagonist is too useless and too licking. The plot is too dramatic. In fact, I can also understand the harem novel. I want to fill in the big holes of the original work. The original heroine I want to accept all the female supporting characters, and I can accept it, but you are a bit too much. You accept everything, and the taste is so unique (heavy taste). The general world of "Gui Chui Deng" is written around going to the tomb. It would be better for you to directly write the mythology. It is original... I can understand it. But you can't directly write the thriller about going to the tomb as a story about going to the tomb and cultivating immortals. It's a personal sense.

It's really okay from the front, but it's really messy from the back. You've changed the plot so much that I'm speechless.

Well! I was looking for tomb robbing articles yesterday and found it on the bookshelf. I didn't expect that the male protagonist would be like this. Is he so impatient to get along with so many women? Isn't there anyone around him to persuade him? Why are you just planning to have fun? You are so irresponsible. If you have some ability, you want to go to heaven instead of becoming the emperor!