My Love Rival Insists We Become a Couple

The author's writing style is excellent, making it easy to read and get into the drama. Urgent for an update. Currently, I like and look forward to Sun Yiming and Xia Jianshang the most as deputy CPs. In many stories, the supporting characters fall in love with the protagonist and then never see anyone else. So Sun Yiming liked the protagonist Gong since he was a child until he saw with his own eyes that the protagonist Gong had someone else in his heart and decided to leave. Very much to my liking. Later, he finally saw Xia Jianshang, who had been accompanying him. Xia Jianshang has a crush on Sun Yiming. He never said he likes her but there is evidence of love between the lines. This is especially killing me. If there is a sister chapter, I have already thought of the title - after breaking up with Zha Gong, I had sex with Zha Gong's brother\ Haha. I still don't know the ending of this couple in the article, so now I'm unilaterally hesitating.

Although the first few chapters of this article were not coherent and felt a little awkward when I first read them, the details later on were in place and the writing was very smooth, and the emotional transitions were also handled very well. The only flaw is that the beginning of each chapter is basically dialogue, which makes it easy to move to the next link, but it feels a bit stiff. So, in general, this article is still very good, but the writing method needs to be improved.

Awesome! I like it so much! Praise! The main character's relationship is not like that in some novels. I think in the novel Yuan Langtian was a real straight man before he fell in love with Xia Yuting, and he was also an ordinary straight man who liked girls. It is not as ambiguous as in some novels! Be more realistic! Forgive me for being clumsy, I don't know what to say. The shortcoming is probably that some chapters are not coherent (or maybe this is the author's writing method!) It's just that I felt a little uncomfortable reading it, but it's pretty good! Like quick rush

The author shows everyone's image vividly, and every detail is basically accurate, without any sense of violation. It feels like a story around him, reasonable, but not ordinary.

It's very good-looking. Yuan Langtian likes Yan Xiaoling, and Yan Xiaoling likes Xia Yuting, so Yuan Langtian regards Xia Yuting as his strongest love rival, but Xia Yuting just wants to be with Yuan Langtian. It's really good-looking, and the couple of deputy CPs are also super sweet. Their parents are also very open-minded and good people. They respect their children's choices. Their dedication and hard work to each other really impressed me. Keep up the good work, author [blowing kiss]

Good luck, I want to watch Tiantian's extra story. Strong recommendation.

Well, I really like that they slowly discovered that they fell in love with a boy (it doesn't matter the gender, they have waited for their own beauty), and I also especially like the understanding and support of their parents. Each pair has its own characteristics and advantages, and is very close to life. I just like the ordinary, pure, and beautiful love and life in their love. The author is great ❤️

Campus cookies~Danmei⊙∀⊙! It's really hard to get angry! ! ! Thank you so much for the author＾0＾~

Jue Juezi! "The Fish Watching the Sea" is written in big letters by the author and it's really beautiful. To me, the whole thing is "sweet". I strongly recommend you to read it. Besides, there is also a very nice sub-CP in it. Go and listen to my instructions, rush rush (^V^)

Title of the book - Love rival insists on forming a CP with me Copywriting——Because of falling in love with someone maybe just a moment a second of touch A reminder of a racing heartbeat CP group - main CP [Xia Yuting & Yuan Langtian] Deputy CP [Yan Chengfeng & Qin Qingyun] [Xia Jianshang & Sun Yiming] Reflection - everything else is very good, except that Xiao Yuan and Nick should be perfect together. It would be even better if they have a side story. Overall, I like this book very much, and they can be together smoothly.