The Lifespan Master

This book has advantages and disadvantages The protagonist has a good personality, he dares to love and hate, and the people around him are not weaklings. Unlike some urban novels, the protagonist has to do everything, as if he owes the protagonist them. But there is one thing to say, sometimes the protagonist's aura is a bit too much. The most obvious one is to open the tomb of the protagonist's master's son. It seems that all the people raised by the country are free. The protagonist comes to do simple things, and other people have to fight to death. That's all my evaluation. I'll end with my final confession to the author. (It's been a while since I've seen an update from the author)

Not bad, the subject matter is novel, and I feel it has great potential. It mainly depends on how the author writes it. In fact, I am looking forward to the protagonist's ascension. I don't know how big the world view of this book is. If I keep it up, I can write a lot. Don't be a eunuch. Come on, author *٩(๑´∀`๑)ง*

I read more than half of it in one go. Although there are a few places that could be set more rationally, it is still a very good book. I finished it in a hurry (✿＞◡❛)

I think it's pretty good. I've read more than a dozen chapters and it's very interesting*:..ﾞ((ε(*´･ω･)っ†*ﾟ¨ﾟﾟ･*:..☆

The protagonist's ability to suck the lifespan of evil people is just like the Sacred Heart of Emperor Shakti

Overall, it's a good book. A little bit a lot. There are no routines, no simple Holy Mother, and there is no big problem in basically filling in holes and foreshadowing and recycling. Especially the story arrangement is excellent. In the early stage, the uprising inheritance starts, in the middle stage, various events are encountered and solved, and finally the ultimate boss is solved. The shortcomings are also obvious. It's just a bit draggy in some places, and the narrative becomes too slow and boring. Furthermore, narration is used to explain the ins and outs of the incident. It is recommended to use items such as character dialogues or books and letters to realize it. Maybe the senses will be better. Another biggest shortcoming is that it is too fatalistic about blood and deus ex machina. The protagonist was originally an orphan, and accidentally helped the old man get the inheritance. Unexpectedly, the old man had known him for a long time, and his parents were not simple. It was actually arranged to sleep for 500 years. If the protagonist can beat him, just push him horizontally. If he can't beat him, he will use the deus ex machina. Rely on the old mouse, rely on the snake, rely on the nine tails, rely on the old man. But overall it's still good and worth reading. Finally, there is a question: Who are the traitors in the underworld? Who knocked Judge Lu on the head? Did I miss it?

The storyline is okay, but the heroine seems to be a bit too much [face covering]. Maybe I prefer 1v1 or non-CP stories. Other aspects are very good.

If you live forever, you don't want to have any descendants. It will only increase worries. Therefore, when you become an immortal, you will abandon all emotions and desires and be neither sad nor happy.

This novel would be wonderful without the heroine. Only novels that are realistic and realistic can make readers want to read it. Is it worth using up three years of life for a piano? One year life span is in line with reality and reality. One hundred million is easy to sell.

It's very interesting. I hope the author can do more coding [smile][smile]