Horror Revival: I Fused with Fiery Golden Eyes from the Start

The book is very good to read, but the plot is a bit too fast, which can easily lead to a breakdown. Moreover, the halo of the protagonist is too serious, and the protagonist is written as too arrogant. This can stimulate the protagonist and make him work harder. Also, the protagonist is so powerful but he still cannot detect her. Generally, powerful people have stronger five senses, so they should not be unable to detect anything wrong with her. There are some missing details in the fighting and training. The author can give more details. For example, when breaking through a bottleneck, he can talk about the differences from before and highlight the strength of the protagonist. (The above opinions are my own. Don't criticize if you don't like it. Everyone is welcome to find faults and put forward their own ideas).

First of all, I would like to declare that I still like this book, but I would like to mention some bad points and hope that the author will not be angry. 1. Level division: The level division feels a bit uncomfortable. The god level should be the last few levels, because it is behind. There may even be super-god-level ones. To be fair, I feel the levels should be adjusted a bit. 2. Detailed issues: What you wrote is somewhat lacking in details. In Chapter 11, the protagonist gained 50 years of cultivation as a Grand Master, but only went from early B-level to mid-level B. This is unreasonable. The article mentioned that the Director of the Spiritual Bureau took eight years from the early B-level to the mid-B level. Does this mean that the director is stronger than the Grand Master? 3. Questions about the use of props: Let me ask, if the protagonist's clone dies, does the soul-eating flower belong to the protagonist? If soul-eating is spent on the protagonist, why not have it clean up the ghosts on the ghost bus? In this way, you can upgrade the Soul-Eating Flower and complete the mission. Why not? The soul-eating flower can now compete with level B, so don't worry that it can't solve it. I have only read Chapter 20 for the time being, and I will slowly ask any questions later. Thank you to the author for writing a great book. This is my first time writing a book review, so I don't quite understand some things. I hope the author will forgive me. 😁

I really don't know what's going on. The things before and after him in this book are actually different. Let's not talk about the several missions he has completed before. The name of the elixir he smoked is different from the name mentioned in the front and the name mentioned in the back! Oh my gosh, this is really tearing down the east wall to make up for the west wall!

This book is good. I followed it from beginning to end. I hope the author will update it as scheduled and it won't be unfinished or overcensored. I also wish the author a happy new year.

A good book

So pretty, but a little lacking

So pretty!

The writing style is a bit green, and this is not a post-apocalyptic novel. Don't write the protagonist so carelessly about human life.

The storyline is still okay. Nothing else works, the points calculation is messy. Strength and other things are inconsistent, and they are always demolishing the east wall to make up for the west wall.

It's so pretty (the ones behind are all my trumpet)