Horror Revival: I Fall for the Slit-Mouthed Woman from the Start

Brothers, there are too many bad reviews. It seems that I wrote something bad. Since everyone likes to read it, I will release the outline and finale I wrote before. After all, this thing can't be too big. Prison. Goodbye, I love you all (( ◞•̀д•́)◞⚔◟(•̀д•́◟ ))

The author should pay more attention to the character design. Although it is a time travel, the material is still very new. Come on, duck.

It's best not to read this comment of mine…

"Wha, what? There is actually a third-grade student who can leapfrog and challenge a sixth-grade student. You must know that the sixth-grade student may be the closest junior high school, and the difference between each grade in elementary school is more than one and a half points. There is actually a third-grade student who dares to challenge a sixth-grade student. Doesn't he want to live?" In the only elementary school in Li Village, two students, one large and one small, were confronting each other. They were each guarding their desks, and powerful auras emanated from them. I saw the student Gao standing with his hands behind his hands, showing disdain, and said in Mandarin, which was not loud but could be heard clearly by everyone, "It's you, do you want to challenge me? I'm in the sixth grade, you have to think about it." Everyone onlookers marveled at his Mandarin. You know, Mandarin is not that easy to speak, but his Mandarin was so standard that even the sixth-grade teacher's Mandarin level was just like this. But the younger student was not afraid at all and used the same standard, even with English Mandarin mixed in. "Nice, so what?" This sentence in English shocked the whole audience. There was actually someone who could mix English with Mandarin without any sense of inconsistency. No one in the entire Li Village had such strength. This kid had such strength at such a young age. How could he do it when he grows up? I'm afraid even the village chief wants to win over him. Moreover, when this child grows up, he may threaten the Murong family, the only high school student in the village. Although he was shocked by this sentence in English, the older student still pretended to be calm, thinking that he was a sixth-grade student and could master Pinyin proficiently, but English was really his weakness. He heard that students in the town, even if they were only in the first grade, could also speak two sentences in English. "Nothing." He sneered. The people who supported the sixth grade students opened their eyes wide, "Idioms, idioms, he can actually use idioms of this level, and in the correct context." "The sixth grade is worthy of the sixth grade, and the light of the firefly dares to compete with the bright moon. I am afraid that these juniors in the third grade will be lost here today." "I wanted to win over him, but unfortunately I lost a good prospect. I thought when he grew up, he could represent the school in the county competition..." Everyone looked at the person who said this, it was the repeater who had been in the sixth grade of elementary school for eight years! ! I heard that this repeater has been stuck in the sixth grade for eight years and has never made a breakthrough. Although his grades are poor, he is extremely knowledgeable about various subjects. Teachers have to rely on him to solve some problems. He actually made such a comment about this third grade student. Looking at this third-grade student, he is neither arrogant nor impetuous, and the expression on his face is very calm, as if the words of the crowd are not talking about him. He sneered and said, "What are you waiting for? Let's compete. Don't waste time. It's lunch break now and I have an English class in the afternoon." "English class!" "The sixth grader exclaimed, "Today is Friday, there are no classes in the afternoon. "It's you who don't have classes. I have to take extra math lessons tomorrow." "He said conversationally

The writing is good, but I can't understand some parts, but overall it feels good to me.

Yes, it's very good, but no matter how many negative reviews there are, since you have decided to write a book, you should insist on finishing it, and don't make us feel that we missed a hundred million in the middle... Come on

I feel great and wonderful, but I really want to know whether the slit girl, Sadako, Jiang Xia and the male protagonist are together in the end? Are the heroines dead or alive? Because didn't we say before that the heroine turned into blood mist and disappeared in order to save the hero? If she died, could the heroine be resurrected? Is the hero dead? Please let the author tell me.

PS: [Realm]: magical power, dragon transformation, title of lord, title of king, divine fire, true god, god of heaven, god king, saint, great saint, saint king, true immortal, (the subsequent realm is to be determined)

The beginning is pretty good, but it's a pity that it fast-forwards too much in the middle and doesn't expand on the writing, which makes it a bit confusing later on. But overall it's still good. I hope the author can write better, come on!

Is there still a chance for Bixian and Kayako to appear? I think the appearance of Bi Xian can be when 🐷 Kaku encounters a very serious danger and Xiaobai summons him to help, or someone who wants to kill 🐷 Kaku summons him to kill 🐷 Kaku and then stage a battle between Bi Xian and Sadako. . . . . . Kayako can be the ghost in the villa sent by Mr. Zhao, and that villa is the haunted house of the evil Mr. Zhao, and then Zhujiao gets a wife and son 😂😂😂 (Hope for reference!)