Livestream: I Offer Another World to My Country

It tells the story of a reborn individual leading his nation to fight against invaders and grow stronger. Overall, the book is quite good; the main plot is clear, the story is full of twists and turns, and it showcases the nation's strength and the people's fearless sacrifice, leaving the reader feeling exhilarated and filled with pride.

As a seasoned bookworm, I can't stand things that contradict the established plot or have illogical reasoning. Before writing, please think like a normal adult and plan your ideas carefully, otherwise the finished product will be a simplistic novel, only suitable for readers who have been reading for one or two years.

I love my country, the place that gave me birth and nurtured me. It's the best, and my motherland is the most powerful.

The logic is chaotic. In the first few chapters, the protagonist is straightforward, has vague memories, and doesn't understand the plot, asking viewers to explain the Resident Evil storyline. Viewers pointed out that the Hive is full of zombies.

The following represents only my personal opinion; please refrain from criticism if you disagree. In general, this book has quite a few problems. First, in the Resident Evil subplot, the protagonist hopes for plot hints from viewers in the livestream, but after a few chapters, the viewers are unaware of the Resident Evil setting, creating a contradiction. Second, the setup is flawed.

This is so incredibly insulting to our intelligence! In the world of film and television, you either have to just say at the beginning that you've never seen it before, or make it seem like everyone has seen it and you're asking people to watch it again. And instead of making it so obvious that even someone watching a live stream wouldn't know the plot, it's the same story.

The setup is contradictory; initially, they wanted information from fans, but later the fans turned out to be clueless idiots.

Update soon, or I'll bring women's clothes to your house in the middle of the night and dress you up. ~\(≧▽≦)/~

You could try your hand at the world of anime, since the advanced technology in anime is unbelievable. In one Japanese anime, a single machine destroyed an entire universe. It's best to avoid novels, like Douluo Continent, One Piece, and Naruto—they're all overdone. This is just a suggestion. It depends on how you write it. If you're skilled, you can write well; otherwise, it'll just become a simplistic piece of writing.

It's good, it's good, but the updates are too slow, I'm afraid it'll have a bad ending. I've read so many novels like this in the past few months, and 100% of them will have a bad ending, but what can I do? It's all because the author doesn't want to write anymore. I've read a novel that has a rating, even a 9.3, and it still had a bad ending. I haven't finished any of them. Will you even be able to finish your novel? Tell me, so I can prepare myself mentally. 🤦