Traveler: “I heard a Chosen One from Langcheng Base came to provoke Ancient City Base?”
Resident: “Dead already. The gun went off, and the guy turned to dust.”
Traveler: “I heard some lord of the Corpse Clan brought an army to wipe out Ancient City Base?”
Resident: “Yeah, they’ve been making trouble for days. Our leader just set up a speaker by his grave, and now everyone’s dancing.”
Traveler: “Have you heard? Someone else is coming to provoke Ancient City Base.”
Resident: “Don’t panic. Listen closely. Once the guns start firing, even the Jade Emperor himself will have to report back to Heaven.”
Wu Yuan was reborn on the day the apocalypse arrived, ten years in the past. He picked up his twin pistols once more and started making waves in the apocalypse.
It looks pretty good, but there's a tiny bit of water, not much, but it's almost drowning.
I'll give it five stars and see how it goes. Good luck, author!