Divine War

This writing is so drawn out, and it even mentions cultivating immortality? What the hell? Would it kill you to just reveal your cultivation techniques directly?

Author, you've given too much of an introduction? Frankly, it's just too much nonsense?

It looks really good.

What kind of immortality are you cultivating? You're not even eliminating the root of the problem. Waiting until someone comes knocking before you fight back is just too much nonsense.

It's pretty good, watchable, no plot holes.