I Want to Do My Job Well Today, Too

I saw some readers' comments on the article. I'm not afraid of criticism. As long as they don't scold me, I can accept it. I hope I can grow with you. This is my first book. There are many shortcomings. If you mention them, I will try my best to correct them. I know that my writing is not good, so I try to enrich the story line. I typed the names of some celebrities unintentionally. Don't scold me. I can't change it now and I will never do it again in the future. My name is a bit useless, sorry, no offense intended, I have an explanation.

I think you wrote this female protagonist too well, and I always feel that the male and female protagonists are forcibly forming a CP. And really, I suggest that the author can write more scenes about Huahua's business, such as participating in singing competitions, variety show field life, intellectual breakthroughs, military camp life, etc., Because this kind of entertainment industry There are too many sweets, and it's really boring to watch. My suggestion is to reduce the presence of the male protagonist as much as possible. The male protagonist has to be involved in everything, follow him no matter what he does, and then chase his wife and so on. I feel really greasy after watching it. Let us see more of how Huahua is rampant in the entertainment industry and how she spoils her fans! I really like the heroine's character. Don't let the male protagonist ruin this treasure book. Also, the author has done a lot of hard work. Come on ↖(^ω^)↗

Why are the names of the heroine's family members all filled with rare characters, and I can't pronounce any of them? Oh wow, this is so embarrassing😓. Is it because I'm not good enough or because my cultural level is limited😓

The framework is very good, but the details are insufficient. It's like a person with a complete skeleton, but he is skinny and skinny. This is not to say that this book is not good. I only gave one star because of obsessive-compulsive disorder (*￣m￣). Sorry to the author.

This book doesn't feel like writing a story, but rather like narrating an insignificant thing. You say you can't read it, but you can read it, and you say you can, but you don't want to read it. Summary: Because of the narration or writing style, I always feel that something is strange. When I read this book, I felt that the plot passed by in a blink of an eye and was not attractive. This is my feeling.

New fan, this book looks good, but the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is too little. I hope there will be more interaction between them in the future. The author must continue to work hard (´-ω-`)

Five stars, I didn't comment until today, and no one said anything, I thought there was no one! Next are the comments and suggestions. First of all, our heroine Huahuazi is beautiful and sassy, ​​the kind that I can't get enough of. She has a cold personality and does what she says. Ah! The male protagonist doesn't seem to have much presence. I actually hope to have some roles. The recent chapters are so sweet to me. Don't you think I'm excited to see the cold goddess fall in love? The previous emotional scenes were not very good, but what you can see is that the author is making great progress! ! Come on! I wish this book will get better and better! ! Wish you get rich soon🙈

I don't like that the male protagonist has a confidante beside him, but he still looks at the female protagonist. Is the domineering president great? So are the heroine's family members. This kind of thing, probably the confidante sees the male protagonist's attention on the female protagonist, and then comes up with a bunch of ideas to kill the female protagonist. Although it's just my guess, this kind of thing is really annoying ヽ('⌒´メ)ノ [Um, personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it]

There are some problems with details, such as the names and surnames are spelled wrong, and from the beginning to the present, I feel like it is simply telling a story. Another problem is that when reading, there is something wrong with the writing. Many words are written wrong.

I think this book is pretty good😁, but the male protagonist, in this book, feels useless. He still wants to increase the attention of the female protagonist. You can add more variety shows and wilderness survival ones, but it's not good to just refer to one. You can add a comprehensive one.