The Longevity Incantation

The male protagonist is too cheap. Not only is he useless, but he also has a lot of problems. He is always doubting others and talks too much. He often puts the people in the team back. And he thought the heroine liked him, but he was a coward and a loser, and he had a lot of problems.

Not bad, but I feel like the plot line is a bit lacking

The plot in the front is compact and interesting, but the tediousness in the back is just a make-up.

It looks good, I like it, but the main character is too cowardly

The front is okay, but the back is too wordy and confusing.

It looks pretty good from the front, but I don't know about the back.