The Longevity Incantation

The male lead is such a jerk! Not only is he useless, but he also has so many problems. He's constantly suspicious of others, talks too much, and always drags the team down. He even thinks the female lead likes him! He's cowardly, incompetent, and has so many issues.

It's not bad, but I feel like there are too few storylines.

The beginning of the story is fast-paced and engaging, but the later parts are rambling and just filler.

It's good, I like it, but the main character is too cowardly.

The beginning was alright, but the end became too verbose and confusing.

The beginning looked pretty good, but I don't know about the rest.