Immortal Lord, Why Are You Scolding Me Again?

The part where the male protagonist is Dan Chuan in the human world at the beginning of this book is really well written. The more I read it, the more I want to read it. But later on when the male protagonist goes to heaven and becomes the Xuan Tian God, it starts to not read well and it becomes more and more mysterious. But what happened to the heroine Yao Yue in the middle when she grew up was really heartbreaking, but fortunately, they ended well in the end.

It's pretty good to watch. The heroine is top-notch in pretending to be stupid, and she's also top-notch in self-abuse. I'm afraid that if I look at the back, I'll find that the heroine has ruined her.

It's also a very good book. Personally, I think: The first part is very interesting, very exciting, and very fascinating to watch. In the middle and late stages, the emotional content of the male and female protagonists is a little less, and the story line is heavier. In the later stage, I basically watched it while jumping 😂😂 But the overall feeling is very good, and the writing is also wonderful.

It's better than Tomato, which has a score of 9 or more. It's quite interesting, but the ending feels a bit rushed.

It should have been four stars, but the author worked hard not to affect the rating. How to put it this way, for the first time I understood the meaning of a bad ending. The ending was hasty, a lot of foreshadowing was not mentioned later, and the reasons were not explained. Danqi and Xuantian seemed like two different and unfinished stories. The painting of the male protagonist is still not clear, and the gentleness and desolation are not well integrated. But it's generally okay, and it can be read even if you're not reading. The ideal score would be 8.5, But it's pretty high-quality here on Tomato. I can give it a 9.1 On Tomato.

The story of the mortal world at the beginning is very attractive, but as you go to the end, it feels a bit... Weak? The ending also felt a bit hasty, especially in the later stages when the male protagonist was immediately offline. But overall I still prefer it, and the author will keep up the good work

The front is very nice, the heroine is cute and interesting, she is a foodie and is shy together with the hero. Later I felt like I suddenly became a weakling. And she felt that nothing could arouse her anger. She was a powerful demon, but she let them do what they did. She only cared about the male protagonist, and she didn't care. However, her life experience was very pitiful. As a demon, her body was eaten bit by bit, and it would be very painful to grow back again.

It was good at the beginning, but in the second half, there was too little description of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, and the ending was obviously unfinished. Should there be a spin-off?

Why do you have to write a plot like amnesia?

This is an unfinished book, and the content is good. However, I personally feel that the book has ended after the male and female protagonists became a mortal couple (I personally think that Chapter 239 is the ending). The following content is its follow-up, but it is not finished. Overall, it is still very interesting [OK]