Honghuang: I Took Over Sect Master Tongtian From the Start

I would like to give the author a sincere suggestion. Although it is a system flow, the author controls it very well. Note that the system is only an auxiliary. You can use the system as a magic weapon to defy the heavens. You need to be strong to forge the iron. The author must make this clear. I like the way the author writes about pig's feet with a pearl of wisdom and understanding, but he also doesn't I can always do it, occasionally give the pig's feet a little setback, and then learn from the lessons and work hard. The specific plot requires the author to work hard to portray. The character image and personality characteristics are well controlled by the author. I hope the author can continue to work hard and not slack off. One thing is that the plot must be rigorous, because rigorous works plus plot The combination of the characterization of the characters can give people a good sense of immersion. Only books with a strong sense of immersion can make people want to stop. Finally, there is the hierarchy of the power system of the book, which needs strict control by the author, because if one is not good, the power system will easily collapse like Dragon Ball. You can write a female protagonist in the middle, but I do not recommend a stallion. I don't really recommend a harem. You can have one or two, or at most three. This is my personal acceptance limit (just my personal acceptance limit). The author's plot, characters, and personality, which have been well written, continue to be maintained and can be surpassed and better. The most important thing is the power system, and the rigor must be strengthened. I hope the author will adopt it.

I saw a different kind of prehistoric times. The prehistoric times I read before were like the prehistoric times reported by the media, but this book is more like the prehistoric times in real life. The content is also very good, and it is not clumsy. It is very enjoyable to read.

This is probably the best novel about the ancient system that I have seen, with rich storylines and vivid characters. Just like the title of the book, at first you think you are writing about system flow, but later you will find that you are writing about an otherworldly version of Tongtian. The author made the character Tong Tian vivid and vivid, without making him too invincible to find an opponent, nor making the system too invincible. The plot is intertwined one by one, and Kavinka is just right (😡😡) which makes people want to stop. The update is also very fast, but I am a bit unsatisfied. I hope it will be updated faster. I have to say that this is a very Nies novel.

The writing is great, and the male protagonist is also very good. I just hope that the author will not write a female protagonist later. I have read a lot of prehistoric novels. The early writing was very good. Later, when the female protagonist was introduced, the character design collapsed. I can't stand it anymore. Isn't it good to have a career? I am very optimistic about the author's book. I look forward to updating it every day. Come on, author💪Please update the book.

This book made me feel that Tongtian lived out the true dignity of Pangu. The human race in this book is the real human race. The human race should suppress all enemies. If it is defeated, it would rather stain the sky with blood and break with the enemy.

I can be considered an old bookworm. I have been reading books for 20 years. I have also read many novels about traveling through the prehistoric times. The routines are basically the same. When I first read this book, it felt like a routine, but when you read the middle part, you will find that a different prehistoric world slowly unfolds like you.

This is the first time I feel so comfortable reading Honghuang novels. In the past, I saw all kinds of low-key concerns, and I was careful not to reveal my strength. The protagonist's level is too slow to improve (although he is still invincible). To me, it is a small flaw, but it is innocuous.

This book is considered to be a decent book in history. After all, it can make people read hundreds of pictures without feeling bored. There is still something interesting about it.

This book is so awesome, so wonderful, each chapter is more exciting than the last chapter, ah ah ah, I can't stand it anymore, I'm really curious, what's next, the author will update it soon

This book is very readable and rigorous in many places. And there are a lot of foreshadowings, who would have thought of it? When I read the first few cards and read the origins of the other two clearings, I found that they were the foreshadowing of hundreds of chapters to come. There were also many trees to help the poor, but this was the one that impressed me the most. After all, it was mentioned from the beginning.