Heavenly Realms Gift Pack: Starting with One-Punch Man

The content is good. Come on, the author, and set new highs.

9 Points, there are still some flaws, but I enjoyed reading the book It's a very interesting and refreshing article... Even if you read it many times, you will still feel it... The author's writing style is very smooth, and the plot is also very exciting... As for those who say they are wise, don't bring reality into novels. People have the final say about other people's different worlds. Just read cool articles and feel happy. How come there are so many requirements?

It's okay, harem novel, please come on, author.

I have seen ants and witnessed giant dragons. Creating the Crystal Palace, Mu Ran sees it from beginning to end. Listening to your joke, I saw Jun Xing's eyes shattered. Lin's words connect to all heavens, and Bei's words touch all realms.

It's a very good book. As for the low reviews, I think there are not many good books on Tomato if you look at the ratings. You don't have to like those trolls, but don't give it one star just because it doesn't fit the original plot! I hope the author will work hard 💪

Author, please listen to me: Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it impresses readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are fluent and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clear, the language is plain yet elegant, concise and full of meaning. It can be called a model of the article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is classic. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying, "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive me for being selfish! No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say one thing: Your novel is so touching! How about... Another chapter?

This dish makes people very appetizing as soon as it is served. The aroma is rich and very tempting. The taste is very crisp, tender and smooth. The rich sauce coats the ingredients, and the sauce fills your mouth when you bite into it. Moreover, the ingredients are very fresh, the portions given are sufficient, and the price-performance ratio is super high.

I think it's super good. I think this book is the best book in Tomato. This is the first book I read after entering the trap, although it is awkward in some places [smile]

This book is okay, not as stated in the comment section. This book mainly focuses on harem, time travel, and invincible cool literature. (Although this book is said to be about time travel to the world of One Punch at the beginning, it is more urban and only uses characters. After entering the world of Naruto, it will be almost the same as other time travel novels) Overall, this book is pretty good and suitable for people who like refreshing writing. (You don't have to read it if you don't like it, please don't insult me, thank you)

A very good book, very exciting, really. Highly recommend this book. The author's writing style still has room for improvement (ง •̀_•́)ง, come on, I'm optimistic about you!